|Reviews for Breaking Point|
| TexasDreamer01 chapter 1 . 2/11
... The outcome of his involvement in the war would end up the same either way. -
| Gamma Cavy chapter 1 . 1/24
this is one of the best what ifs for ATLA I have ever found, the guard seems to have been better for Zuko than gallivanting all over the world in search of a legend.
| GalanthaDreams chapter 1 . 1/16
I would love, love, love to see what you could do with this. I know it is intended as a oneshot but your premise is absolutely delicious.
| KeL chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
*pokes story curiously*
follow-up oneshot? I wanna see where the butterflies take this. I mean, assuming that Zhao and Azula have been taking Zuko's spot on the gaang-hunt, that means that 1. no personal grudges, but 2. minimal exposure to non-crazy evil firebenders. Which opens the door for all sorts of awkwardness, especially if he's avoiding telling them about his family...
| KodeV chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
instant favorite. i'm hoping that you will do a follow up on this, although it stands alone by itself beautifully.
| axel100 chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
A terrific what if one shot. Of course the original is still prefered, if only to see Zuko's growth as a character. Thanks for this gem though!
| Hebi R chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
...and if he had a significant militia backing him and greater support from his nation from those who saw him serve in the Home Guard...
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
really nice concept.
| BoutsofInsanity42 chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
I would love to see this taken further.
| Kitty-Chan UchiNaru no Miko chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
I desperately want more of this. Pretty please? It's such a wonderful setup!
| ByLanternLight chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
| Kiara.Queen.of.Kaos chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
This is a good idea.
| irezel chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
*sighs* zuko, my love, your story will never not be interesting.
| Kinnaq chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
Such an interesting take on what could have happened. There's what Zuko did while in the Home Guard that might have changed the Fire Nation and his views, but also what Zuko didn't do while chasing the Avatar. I also like the simpleness to this- it gives information yet allows everyone else to draw their own conclusions, too. A follow-up would be nice, but it's perfect as is.
| quoththeraven5 chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
this is awesome! Make an interesting story if you continued! :)