Reviews for Ninja Who Lived
RLTfThe Pomo pk chapter 15 . 2/14
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beowolfalein chapter 16 . 2/11
I would love if you got back to this
Emerald Time chapter 16 . 1/21
Please tell me this isn't abandoned! It's been years, but I'm hoping you will eventually come back to this. This is great and I would love to read more. Good luck in your writing!
SilentProwler chapter 16 . 1/9
I'm hoping this is simply on hiatus due to writers block...I can't wait for said block to be over, but it would be better than thinking this is abandoneded...
Lady FoxFire chapter 16 . 12/29/2017
I notice you haven't update in 4 yrs so is this a dead fic or one in which RL is playing games with?
celf chapter 16 . 12/13/2017
i would like to see more of this story.
Warehouse1 chapter 16 . 12/10/2017
Really enjoyed this story, hope you get your muse back some day :(
Guess chapter 16 . 11/20/2017
This is an absolutely beautiful story.
Guest chapter 12 . 11/17/2017
and begun - and began

blushed at the pleasure - blushed in pleasure

throwing only this over her shoulder - saying over her shoulder
Guest chapter 11 . 11/17/2017
but didn't think it was unlikely that - but found it likely that
(that kind of double negative was a bit cumbersome to read)
Guest chapter 10 . 11/17/2017
owe me hundred ryo - owe me a hundred ryo
Guest chapter 9 . 11/17/2017
appartaed - apparated

did not become to other clan heads - did not become known to other clan heads

battle ground - battleground

and in time - and in a time

for a trick - for such a trick
Guest chapter 4 . 11/16/2017
Harry's cursed - Harry cursed

Blond girl - Blonde girl (with an 'e' when female)

The comment had given Harry the idea for the cover he needed for his other purpose conveniently - The comment had conveniently given Harry the idea for the cover he needed to fit his other purpose
Guest chapter 3 . 11/16/2017
A mangled sentence:
If I knew you can't betray me, I'd be too happy - If not for me knowing that you can't betray me, I would be only too happy
Guest chapter 2 . 11/16/2017
legilimens attack - legilimency attack

his owl legilimens curse - his own legilimency

and diamond shaped mark - and a diamond shaped mark
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