Bet Kreacher is tearing Grimmauld apartlooking for that locket now. To his pov, it just straight upped and vanished.

You will never read this, but I loved the story, the reason for my name is because it has not been seen what happens to the bad guys... of course they have been arrested and tried but nothing of that is seen... in Most if not all stories you don't see what happens to the bad guys at the end of the story... it's annoying and unpleasant, it's like the authors of those stories are saying "let's make it so that the bad guys are causing pain and death the whole story, but we are going to let them escape because we don't want to write what is going to happen to them" I don't care if they are in prison or executed if we can't see it

Honestly, I think that if the rest of the governments kept Riddle confined in Great Britain, he doesn't have to go and confront him. If he can't get out of there, he just has to go to another country and that's it.

but it is obvious that even with that obviousness you will end up making me save those who do not deserve to be saved... which is most hateful

In all honesty (if you read this) it feels like Dumbles regretted too quickly how he let Harry be abused and lose his godfather for his "greater good"

unless he is faking it so as not to receive more complaints from his subordinates... but he feels very forced to go from defending what he has done to completely repenting in such a short time.

A part of me wants Harry to leave the wizards to his fate.

Well I have got to admit that I rather enjoyed this storyline.
It’s not everyday I read a HarryPotter/X-Men story.
I was happy that Jean was a central character and Logan got more page time as well.
I’m happy that you made Ginny a very likeable character and not bad or evil as most authors tend to do.
I like how Harry has the powers of Kitty Pryde and also that you used my favourite character Storm a few times.
Thanks for writing this story.
Onwards I go.
Take care and be well!

Imagine my surprise when I discovered that the author has more stories.
Her work, "The Queen that fell to the Earth" is one of my all time favourite stories to read.
I was saddened to hear about the authors death.
I haven't read many Harry/X-Men stories so my reading this is so refreshing.
Onward I read.
Take care and be well!

Okay like, i love this story but I’m kind of wanting to put Dumbledore, Jean and Xavier into an incinerator. How dare you decide that he’d fight a damn war when he’s told you he doesn’t want to. Who cares if he might change his mind later, that’s his decision to make, not theirs.

I just wanted to say that I really enjoy the stories that you write, I think they are well written and very entertaining. Thanks for the entertainment and chance to read your work.

Great!

I dont understand the point you,the author are trying to create. At the beginning of the story, you place a lot of emphasis on how badly Harry had been treated and to what an extent he has been damaged. You even set up Jean to be able to understand all that Harry has gone through via her abilities. Then invalidate it all within a single chapter by having him so easily forgive everyone and Jean pushing him to take the high road and do so.

Absolutely no continuity in the emotional sense. Dropped it around chapter 8 when he starts forgiving everyone and then even Ron.

Good vocab and writing, horrible emotional development.

Thats just stupid to forgive them

Please don't make harry forgive them or save the wizarding world also he shouldn't end up with ginny or hermione

Please don't let him forgive them or get with Ginny

Oh yes. Go mom! Tell them straight how you’re going to make me fight to the death to defend these pieces of shit while doing absolutely nothing to defend me but blabber some non threats! Truly! I just love manipulators pretending to love me while doing absolutely nothing to remotely useful!

Jean is a fucking useless bitch consistently working against Harry.