|Reviews for Stranded|
| Shadowgirl666 chapter 17 . 6/21
OK so its 5:17am and I just finished reading this story. I couldn't stop, I started around midnight, so like 5 hours ago, and halfway through the last 7 chapters I would tell myself "I'm gonna go to sleep at the end of this chapter". But I couldn't it was amazing :D
| R.S.L chapter 17 . 3/3
ok i liked it but i dont think nel would use the f word an were r her brothers an pet? an y did lilinette have 2 die? i love this soi fon she cool normally i h8 her cuz she the biggish brat around next 2 mayuri
| TezuSezu chapter 17 . 1/19
this is the bestest grimmichi fic ive read EVER !
thank you so much for write such an amzing story !
it's a pity that there's no sequel though ...
I like them being together other than byaichi and ichihitsu ...
(although, for some reasons, I rather like grimmichi as mpreg victim ... muahahahahhaa)
| Crimson Ink Blot chapter 3 . 10/24/2014
love the fic
| HelleBelle chapter 2 . 10/4/2014
Welp he tired even though he didn't get far LOL
| HelleBelle chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
huh Mayuri knew what he was doing ,ah such a evil man he is.
| SalinaSwathe chapter 17 . 9/16/2014
*applauds* Ah, that was so wonderful! Everything was amazing and breath taking, and you made using present tense look easy (Oh the failures of present tense I've seen in the past *shudders*)! Every chapter had me on the edge of my seat, laughing out loud, and wanting to read more, checking desperately to make sure that this story was actually complete. I kept wanting to leave reviews on other chapters, but my fingers hit the "next" button before I could remember. The ending is great and honestly continuing something like this would be both difficult and unnecessary. I love this story, and I love you for writing it *hugs*
| Zayabel13 chapter 17 . 8/22/2014
aaw! KAIDA GOT HER ASS POWNED! I love this series thank you, and I love you... marry me
| KokoBlurOtaku chapter 1 . 8/18/2014
OMFG IT'S SO GOOD THAT I RE-READ THIS LIKE 4 TIMES ! PLEASE WRITE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS ! ICHIGO AS UKE
| Cheshires Mask chapter 17 . 8/6/2014
oh my god please make the sequel love your story so much!
| mirrorimage33 chapter 17 . 5/17/2014
I think the first to chapters don't have enough detail...like Ichigo's actual reaction. How he sees things. I believe they move a wee bit too fast, but otherwise, I loved your story. It was great, I loved the plot, and the Kaida ordeal was a great epilogue. Though, I really hope there's a sequel when I go check. Loved your story! Thanks for writing it!
| anonymous chapter 17 . 4/23/2014
that was a very good ending, but the start moves too fast. the first two chapters need to slow down so we can see how ichigo actually reacts. now, this is just for if you plan on revising, someone being raped is not going to feel happy about it. it's a psychological thing, it doesn't matter whether or not they had wanted to have sex with the person before, they will react very badly to it. a suggestion for that is, maybe have grimm attempt to woo ichigo before the sex not just physically but mentally too. that way he has enough time to decide to go along with it and enjoy it beforehand. especially if ichigo was already willing just shy that would make the enjoyment much more believable and less sudden. please remember, this is just advice if you do not like it don't listen to it and ignore it. but I do ask that you think about what I've pointed out as things which can be improved and at very least slow the first two chapters down if you edit. thank you
| Crystal dragon the yaoi fan chapter 17 . 12/28/2013
I love the name Kaida, and the story was great!
| Cerucci chapter 17 . 11/13/2013
This story is just so freaking amazing I love it! You're such an amazing writer. I'm gonna go read all of your stories now, as long as they are mpreg, I only read mpregs :D again this story is just amaze-balls! :D
| SoulMore chapter 17 . 10/8/2013