|Reviews for My Brother!|
| caring16 chapter 21 . 3/21/2013
hmmm what can i say about this story? *coughs and clears throat* THIS IS SO TOTALLY EPIC SO AWEOMSE WICKED MORE PLEASE *coughs* anyway this is really looking epic so am looking to reading the next chapter until next time good luck writing
| ecilaxXxalice chapter 21 . 3/17/2013
no more people. i can barely keep up with the characters as it is.. lol. so many :) but you do an excellent job. personally, i don't like either of those names. oracle guild sounds okayish, but is pushing it in my books. why not come up with another acronym like the owl and newt exams? but for the defense group... ummmm.
idk... okay maybe not. i can't think of anything... the grim group as a kind of private inside joke with ron, but also considering that bad things happen that they overcome... hmmm. enlightenment... family... just throwing around words that might jog something... idk... they all seem to help each other out, and idk how oracle relates to the group... besides the divination class and the later prophecies... but yeah. its 4 am.. goodnight... lol
| ecilaxXxalice chapter 20 . 3/17/2013
i think they would emulate the fear sort of like a movie. like if harry were to see himself carrying a dead emma. you would see yourself with missing teeth, and neville would see himself flying.. but then again, i'm not sure.. lol. btw. amazing story. so far, its been taking me longer to read then deathly hallows took me, but i don't mind, i really enjoy the story. . so far i have spent 26 hours and 37 minutes reading this story. lol. i use the counter i got forever ago in gradeschool. and actually, when i started reading harry potter, until i got to the fifth book- and sometimes later, i would always go to sleep, dreaming up stories about harry finding his sister. when i got to the seventh year, i dreamt of him finding his sister in godric hollow as his enemy(completely used by lord voldemort) but yeah, enough rambling. i have to get to the next chapter before 4 am... lol :) i'll review again when i finish the story :D
| XXciciXkitsuXX chapter 21 . 3/16/2013
While I like your suggestions for the group name; may I suggest one? The Defenders. I really like this story, and I was really excited when you started updating again.
| Guest chapter 21 . 3/10/2013
Good chapter, really like how Harry has met sirius I'm guessing you're going to have meet up like that more often, which would be good. Don't add any more 'members' there's probably too many already. And I have to say that with any school, even Hogwarts, a teacher (particularly a female) would not storm into a boys dorm like that.
| PotterfanDJM chapter 21 . 3/6/2013
Woohoo! Another excellent chapter. I both like and dislike how Harry is learning the patronus charm on his own. On one hand, it further characterizes him as a defense prodigy, but on the other, I feel that learning the patronus from Lupin was a huge bonding experience that 13 year old Harry needed right then in his life. And speaking of, I like how the patronus charm is supposedly flawed. Maybe its supposed to be feelings of protectiveness? Self-confidence? I don't know, but it has me thinking, and I like it when stories provoke thoughts.
And I hear ya about the whole female dominant group. But at the same time, its also a "year under Harry dominant" group. There are more characters besides Susan, though. There's Ernie MacMillan and a handful of other guys from other houses. There are even relative unknowns to be worked with. search "Harry Potter and Me" on the Harry Potter wikia, you'll see all of Harry's yearmates.
I'm liking the new Buckbeak angle, and the use of the Room of Requirement. Its a mix of maturity and harmless teenage fun in this chapter.
And what a difference a chapter makes! There wasn't any "?" cringing on my part, this chapter read and looked spectacular in that regard.
Phenomenal job, keep up the good work :)
| Guest chapter 21 . 3/4/2013
I don't think you should add more...I can't even remember the other girl's name...Who is she?
| avengeme chapter 21 . 3/3/2013
i like defence guild for the name. why doesnt harry just ask lupin about the patronus since lupin saw him faint from the harry met sirius(even if he doesnt realise it)
| Guest chapter 21 . 3/3/2013
i don't think adding more people would be a good idea personally. maybe just ahve them friendlyw ith them but not a part of the group... Oracle Guild sounds nicer than theothers to be honest! Cannot wait to read more of this wonderful story!
| SunshineForever96 chapter 21 . 3/2/2013
I really love this story. I hope you update soon!
| xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 21 . 3/2/2013
good go on!
| bubbahcakes chapter 5 . 3/1/2013
I'm sorry if a bunch of people have told you this and I'm the one millionth person to say this, but I just want to be certain you know:
You forgot to separate the two halves of the first chapter into two parts, and then you posted the second half anyway. I hope that made sense, and again, sorry if this pisses you off...
But anyways, I love this story and I think it's one of the best Harry Potter stories I've read. (Yeah, it's that good.)
| Mrs. Albus Severus Potter chapter 21 . 3/1/2013
Cool! If you add Susan, you can give Sirius some help via Ameila Bones at the end of POA. Are the Potters going to find out early and help Sirius? What about Neville's grandmother?
| mdauben chapter 21 . 3/1/2013
It was great to see an update today, especially such a nice big one! You have me curious as to how Harry is going to handle the Patronuses Charm in your story. Loved the unexpected meeting between Harry and Sorius, too.
Regarding your questions, I like the Defence Guild. The Oracle Guild sounds more like a Divination club. As far as adding more characters to the group I would prefer not. As you say we already have quite a few to keep track of I don't think you really need any more.
Looking forward to your next update!
| Splendora-C.A.M-McGonagall chapter 21 . 3/1/2013
this story is intersting enough without them. but I also think it would be interesting with them added in. but I love this story.