Reviews for My Vice
AsterLea chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
"Something from the bakery?" Well, he was certainly in for a surprise. James' initial reaction was completely natural- I'm glad you didn't make him dive right in and join them. It's kinda hard for me to imagine Lily as a total vixen, but you make it believable because she's not completely over the top. I don't know what it is about these M-rated oneshots that you write, but they're so...well...smutty without ever being squicky. You use the right amount of detail to make it scandalous, but not so much it grosses the reader out. Great job!
Rose of Dark Life chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
Am I allowed to say that was a bit scary? LoL. It was great :D
obsessivegirl73 chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
Woah you wrote LilyJames? :O even though Sirius was in it. nice job. :) I'll be reviewing more stuff shortly.
DressagePunk chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
That was well interesting, I never really thought of all three of them together, but very well done.
TellatrixForever chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
Nice.