|Reviews for The Director of Project Freelancer|
| WhimsicallyAwkward chapter 9 . 7/8/2012
I like that your an aspiring writer, but I'm here to reccomend you move your story to
It was designed by the same people who made this website, but it's for you to write your very on story(like this one), as opposed to writing fanfiction in another author's world.
As far as I can see, this has nothing to do with Alpha and Omega series, so look into the other site.
| Lunar D. Hayase chapter 2 . 12/9/2011
Oh... Much, much better this time that they're actualy 17.
I still found a small problem. Sometimes you tend to write "I and (someone's name)", isn't that wrong? It should be "(someone's name) and I".
| Lunar D. Hayase chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
I liked this first chapter, quite nice and I have only one small thing I disagree with in the characters: they act too old for their age. They're 11/12 but they act like they're 15/17... But I enjoyed the rest.
Good luck for the rest!