Reviews for Sinner's Island
pgrabinEdward chapter 10 . 6/24/2014
wow- great scenes- they didn't fully join- that's possibly what Edward's forgetting- also the earlier Volvo joke was halarious!
pgrabinEdward chapter 9 . 6/24/2014
Wow- great chapter and cliff- hanger- poor Jasper "just friends" is a harsh phrase!
pgrabinEdward chapter 8 . 6/23/2014
Wow- so hot! Love this story! I'd love for it to go truely supernatural (vampires/voodoo, etc) but all human is ok. In other fan fics, when characters use Creole, slang, or foreign languages, I like a glossary at the bottom in the author's notes but w/Jacob- it was pretty clear what was what...
pgrabinEdward chapter 6 . 6/22/2014
Loved it! Beautiful!
pgrabinEdward chapter 4 . 6/22/2014
Wow- great chapter and I love how the ending with the 3 "things" is like Twilight in a twisted way! I don't think Edward should go back to the island- at least not until he's more comfortable with himself!
pgrabinEdward chapter 3 . 6/22/2014
Love the suspense! The background of Edward's teaching job makes more sense- why he's so upset...
pgrabinEdward chapter 2 . 6/22/2014
Interesting! Seems like a bit of magic or mystical power is out there- love the obsessed/clueless Edward!
pgrabinEdward chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
Great story and descriptions. I think it's strange for a man to use the word "giddy" but that is a stronger word than excited. Sounds like a great plot!
Guest chapter 17 . 5/30/2014
10. I think I've read this story at least 8 times. The funny thing is I used to live in South Texas now I live in Southeast Texas and I've gone to pleasure island.
xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx chapter 17 . 4/17/2014
10 all the way!
LisaF29 chapter 17 . 3/23/2014
Great story! I know you wrote this a while ago, but I just read it for the first time and I loved it! I connect some with the story mainly because of where it takes place. I don't live in Louisiana, but I live in Texas, close to Louisiana, and I've been there quite a bit and my stepfather was born there, so I have an affinity for the place. I loved reading about Jasper and Edward and their relationship. Just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed the story. Keep up the good work!
Rachel Garber chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
I have so many slash stories I want to read (now that I have found so many I am becoming insatiable, lol) however, I just wanted to stop back and tell you that I enjoyed this story so much because it had a real plot to it. Edward had just gotten out of an unsatisfying marriage and his sister recommended the b and b of her girlfriend, he met a gorgeous, but mysterious man with a painful past with men. The characters were well developed and you seem to be able to describe sexual relations with men accurately, however, one of the things I like about yours and other stories is that they are not slam bam thank you man, but stories of men falling in love, getting hurt emotionally, and finding their way out of their pain with the help of Mr. Right instead of Mr. Right Now. Thanks
Rachel Garber chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
I am going to be starting a fb group specifically for slash stories, if you don't mind this is going to be among the first for which I post a link. I can only post review here but have no access to your blog, long story having to do with an old email address and password which I don't remember. I am on fb as Rachel Garber if you wish to PM me.
Rachel Garber chapter 17 . 2/15/2014
I have run out of words well I loved it of course and I give it a 9 1/2 because I want to read your other stories.
Rachel GArber chapter 16 . 2/15/2014
Well that was wowee, I shed a tear, and Written in the Stars happens to be the title of a fake book that is modeled after a real book just like Twilight, bellybeans is a contributor with a fanfiction of her own where she writes From Hate to Heat. Anyway that was lovely, and Edward's novel (novella would be more accurate I guess, or short story) was very good. Wow the carved letters in the tree, amazing but what really floored me was Edward's job interview at Bon Terre I thought he was still in Chicago, and that the school just happened to be the same name as the town where Jas lived. Edward's overthinking in bed was a bit "I'm really gonna smack you, boy" ish, but Jas got him out of his head. great proposal scene, very cute.
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