|Reviews for Cartman Goes to Hell|
| W. Stock chapter 1 . 2/8
You made several spelling and punctuation errors in this fic.
You also failed to portray Satan as being anything like he was on the show. Wouldn't it be humorous if we actually heard the list of Cartman's misdeeds, as well? This story isn't nearly as funny as it could be given the subject matter, and if it is funny at all, it's mostly unintentional humor at how childishly and poorly written the story is.
| Cool chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
I'm glad that Cartman is in Hell
| Ryo-chan wolfgirl chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Sweet justified justice. If there's anyone in South Park who deserves to rot in Hell it's Cartman.
I can just picture Stan Kyle and Kenny, after hearing what happened, looking sad when their parents tell them then after they leave to let the boys grieve the boys begin cheering.
"Oh my God, they killed Cartman!"
"Thank you God!"
"There really is a God!"
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
| Dr. Gavel HD chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Dude, this is T material, and it's not in Spanish.
| Marcus Absent chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
Ok, even though this is a really short story with a lot of spelling errors (sorry for being so critical, it's my nature), this is really funny. LOL at Cartman's ultimate punishment!
| 9889NO LONGER IN USE9889 chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
Ya know this is written well and stuff but...
I'm kinda offended we all know Cartman can be a asshole but this I think is like well...
Hmm I can't even put it in words he IS my favorite character and yes I know he is an asshole but don't you think this is a little hmm overboard?
Well oh well it's written well and stuff so..