Reviews for The Soul Threadbare
Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2015
Awesome Danny fix. Scott Caan's could do this scene perfectly. He's excellent. I always want more Danny fics. Best character on the show.
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 1 . 4/18/2015
Poor Danny all the pain he went through with that hole ordeal.
CinderH chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
I have no idea why I didn't review before, seeing as how this is one of my favorites, but this is really wonderful. I can totally picture this entire scene being played out. I felt so bad for Danny when he had to admit to Steve about the baby and Rachel. I love your H5-0 stories.
Rainey chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
This was terrific. So full of the emotions and interactions we don't get to see on the show. Great job.
Effie chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
I love this story.
wotumba1 chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
great story!
LisaG16 chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
great short...i wish the show would do something similar to this, because they seem to be completely glossing over the pain danny must be in with this situation. and funny that you wrote this last year before the recent epi where rachel gives birth and the other father at the nursery window says the baby has danny's nose...hmmmm! maybe it really IS his kid! but anyway, i think they need to have an episode or even just a scene or 2 showing danny's pain over losing rachel and the promise of another child.
cytpotter chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
Poor Danny... my heart ached for him when he said about Racheal and the baby not being his on the season premier... and I think you captured very well the hell he is gonna go through... even if we don't see it on the tv screen.
sparra-music chapter 1 . 9/27/2011

I don't remember a hole in the wall in Danny's apartment... but then again, I don't remember ever seeing his apartment. Must have been one of the episodes I missed.

And while I have trouble believing Danny would ever get that physical, that out-of-control... you've made this believable.

And more than believable, compelling. Taut. And I can see Rachel as being evil enough to pull off her part of this story.

Now, I just have one favor to ask. Since we found out last night that Kono gets the boot and is going to trial... could you write an angsty fic like this for her?
AZGirl chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
To think Rachel would do Great job on the angst in this story!
montez chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Love the Danny story-I'm a Danny-girl and agree, there need to more Danny stories.
TMVH50 chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Sorry I accidentally hit the "done" button before finishing my review! What I was saying is that I hope the writers on the show explore Danno's emotions even just a portionas deeply as you did. I sense that Danno is trying to hide some of the pain from Steve so that Steve won't feel guilty - he is the reason that Danno missed the flight to NJ after all!

I look forward to more Danno-centric stories from you. And especially the next chapter of Counting the Cost!
TMVH50 chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
I really liked how you delved into Danno's emotions in this story. I hope the writers ex
Maz101 chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Nicely done! You conveyed Danny's fury really effectively - the pent up control, then the sudden bursting of the dam of all that emotion. The dialogue rang wonderfully true too. I see more baby angst along the way.

Effie17 chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Wow, great story. You out did yourself. Totally adding this story to fvorites.
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