|Reviews for Dark Jewel|
| Wom1 chapter 22 . 12/7/2017
The only problem i have with this story is shepard. He is simply to renegade, hes giving hoch from uplift a run for his money but doesnt even have the excuse of being in the SS or revenge.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2017
What do you mean by "blink bastards"?
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/2/2017
Oh God the Angst. Add to the fail grammar and this has something in common with the dinosaurs.
| Mark chapter 22 . 11/2/2016
Still waiting for the 'real games' to begin. :/
| RicotheReaper chapter 7 . 8/4/2016
"I will see you soon John, very soon." She said softly to herself as the lights on her room turned off, not before a hissing sound came in, along with a moan…"
So many possible meanings for this statement, very few are nothing less then A rated.
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/6/2016
Bow chicka bow wow
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2015
Really, really well done! I read a fair amount of books myself and I found this interesting as well as engaging. I applaud you, good sir or madam. Keep up the fine work!
| trolltrollingtroll chapter 1 . 5/3/2015
Y U NO UPDATE ლ(ಠ_ಠლ) ?
| MKTerra chapter 22 . 11/24/2014
this needs to be updated.
| Comic Kazii chapter 1 . 9/15/2014
Good story. Not a big fan of dark shepard though. I think it would have been more fitting to let the batarian live, to see that childs body in his dreams and nightmares, to mourn all of his friends who died next to him. Hed suffer all right, but hed live to suffer longer. Sounds darker actually, i guess its all in how you word it. Anyway, nice story and all. Hope you continue it.
| Markfrodo chapter 9 . 6/4/2014
Ive read this story over 3 times. And i want the next chapter.
Cause its good. And i wish to study this story...
You know FOR SCIENCE!
| joniedinofreak chapter 22 . 5/8/2014
For some reason I think Samara won't respond to the commander... kindly...
Though I fear the Morinth possibility too.
Ah well, good story, hope you'll continue.
(Also for another reason I am actually feeling sorry for Legion already :'( )
| Guest chapter 22 . 4/7/2014
Your foreboding messages D: update soon, I love the refreshing change of pace this fic has!
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/7/2014
I really hope you make the fic eventually with a bonded shep\daro! She's my favorite quarian, and there are far more talimancing fics already :D can't wait to finish what is currently up!
| The Wandering Reader chapter 22 . 2/27/2014
Wow TIM is one badass Chessmaster...
Liking this fic so far(Despite the whole Shepard/Daro thing since I'm a Talimancer myself)
Your not planning in destroying the geth are you? Especially if you're intending to apply their version of the morning war.