|Reviews for OneTwo Punch|
| The Goliath Beetle chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
Four reviews? Are you kidding me!
This was excellent. However, I spotted a basic punctuation error:
"I know, I know." he said. "Yeah, I know."
"I know, I know," he said. "Yeah, I know."
Comma, not full-stop.
Otherwise, this was a brilliant piece of writing. It grasped the tension and the angst brilliantly. I enjoyed this.
| International08 chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
You write these two so well. I can truly see how this could have happened, with the combination of grief, betrayal and anger that you capture here.
| Twinchy chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Wow, this is such a brilliantly written, well-thoughtout and emotion-packed story about friendship and betrayal.
Esposito and Ryan truly rock! And you nailed their characters hands down!
I really enjoyed reading it.
| vic32 chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
I've never seen this show but i really enjoyed this story. The grief and pain that was there and the support of a partner was nicely written. It must have been a huge pain to want to do that and the fact that it hurt so much i could feel it.
Thank you for sharing this story with us. Hope we see more from you in your other fadom's as well such as my fav and a lots of your fans fac's Due South.
keep up the amazing work xxx
| annie.of.belle chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Wow. That was... beautiful. Well written, clear, it explored of both the individual and the depth of the partnership...
I am in awe.