Reviews for Alpha Daughter
StoryBeta chapter 7 . 2/14/2016
If you really want a beta I'd love to help you out all you need to do is send me the chapters and I'll fix them for you and send you the chapter to see if you like it or if there's anything you want me to fix
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
Can you continue it please
Caliborn96 chapter 7 . 4/9/2014
You need a beta. too many spelling mistakes.
chelseacherelus chapter 41 . 4/6/2014
please don't stop their it took me a day and half just to catch up, and I bet their father is still alive and not dead
brankel1 chapter 41 . 12/9/2013
I love it.
Guest chapter 11 . 11/25/2013
Please stop saying baby girl
connie13367 chapter 40 . 11/8/2013
this is a good story, can't wait for updates
wanda uley pack chapter 14 . 10/11/2013
Damn! Deep lemons!
wanda uley pack chapter 13 . 10/11/2013
Wow! Lemons!
wanda uley pack chapter 12 . 10/11/2013
I wud drop dead if my dad found me n my babe talkin lyk tht
wanda uley pack chapter 8 . 10/11/2013
I hope she'll b okay
wanda uley pack chapter 7 . 10/11/2013
Andrea iz damn lucky! Gosh,,i love paul n i enjoyed ths chapter except gramatical errors
wanda uley pack chapter 6 . 10/11/2013
Paul! Oh gracious heavens,,i cnt lose him! :'( :-( :-[
wanda uley pack chapter 3 . 10/11/2013
I wish paul imprinted on me
wanda uley pack chapter 3 . 10/11/2013
I wish imprinted on me..it wud be the best thing in the world ;-)
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