Reviews for Pony Club Secrets:StarShine Jenna and the jump off
KatnissTheMockingjayOnFire chapter 2 . 10/30/2013
It is very your punctuation and it was fine.
HannahStylesForever chapter 2 . 4/25/2013
more soon
Guest chapter 2 . 11/16/2012
DisguisedNerd chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
By the way, Mrs brown issie's mother doesn't hate horses but she scared of them so she wouldn't say:
"Isn't Natasha riding that horse beautifully wow That horse is a real stunner." Miss Brown breathed.
I understand before you said Issie stood by the fence where her mum was watching but her mother had no idea about horses.
but still she wouldn't be watching in the first place.
I am being quite fussy, so sorry if im being tooooooo fussy :)
DisguisedNerd chapter 2 . 9/5/2012
By the way, Issie is not the jealous type and is always trying to be friends with Natasha, so she tries not to have any rivalry between good story! hope you do more soon.
LoveVampireDiaries chapter 2 . 8/26/2012
hey, I was wondering if you are going to write any more? xxxx
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
This was really good but Issie never carries a whip, and hates to use it, so i dont think she would hit blaze hard for not doing something, and its Goldrush, but other than thats its really good!
ranger Lauren chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
I love it even though i have never rea the pony club secrets books
Niamh-xx chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
continue :) i think this is really good :)
Livinginadaydream chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
This is really fantastic. I like the title of the story too. :)
Dustpelt chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Just read and reply if i should carry on with the story, I do accept criticism as it will help improve my writing. Hope you all like it!