|Reviews for Feelings At Bay|
| 6GunSally chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Cute story! Like an earlier reviewer said, the chapter did seem rushed. I do hope you update too because Emily does have some 'splaining to do!
| NIrish chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
Oooh I like it! Next chapter anytime?
If you want a criticism? I felt the chapter was a bit rushed :) and I read AgiVega's review, I agree with everything he/she said but at the same time it's just a wee fanfic so don't hassle yourself too much with details. I like this!
| Kaylee chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
I like it! Are you going to be writing anymore? There isn't enough Laurence/Emily, as far as I'm concerned!
| AgiVega chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
That was sweet, though a little odd. I felt it weird that Laurence had been in love with Emily for a long time (meaning he must have loved her years and years before when she was only a young teen in Australia), but he doesn't recognise her now? And how come Harcourt, Berkley and the others knew about his feelings for Emily, when the last time they had seen him had been before he'd left to Australia, and then Emily had been only 13. I doubt if Laurence had been in love with her so early, that would make him a pedophile, and he's so not the type. And had Granby too known of Laurence's love for Emily? It wasn't clear for me...
Well, it's still a promising story (nice to see some L/E at last), and I hope to see Emily's explanation soon. :)