|Reviews for A Project|
| Saga of Eternal Rain chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
It was short but pretty sweet. I love any good additions to the LaviYuu section of fanfic and this is one of them. :) It's good to see your motivation in writing too.
| machibibi chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
Aw, that was really cute~ I think Kanda's sort of hard to write IC since he's canonically a hardcore asshole pre-Alma, but I think it's something you're allowed to overlook a bit with LaviYuu. ( ) (Or you'd never actually get anywhere in terms of plot). I think you write Laviyuu pretty well, and I read all three of your Lavi/Kanda fics.
Minor grammar mistakes though:
"'I'm not cold! Idiot usage…' Kanda grumbled..."
"'SLOW DOWN!' Kanda shouted, slapping the young beside him."
I'm not sure what you mean by "the young". Young man? Youth?
"Not 2 hours later was Kanda being forced..."
This should be, "Not 2 hours later, Kanda was being forced..."
Looking forward to more of your fics!
| scienceguy chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
This was a delightful read - both sweet and charming, and was exactly the LaviYuu fic I was looking for.