|Reviews for Heat|
| Silver1226 chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
_ Well that was lovely :)
| Alysisaacs17 chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
Haha this was just awsome.
I like this so much its one of my fave !
You almost had me squeeling like a teenage girl -.- not cool
well the story was
| Haunt of twilight chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
this is great! I hope you do write a second chapter!
| KassiopeiaMond chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
"I already know that even though this is a finished story your going to want another chapter, i will think about it, but i have a lot on at the moment so it may be a while, but never say never."
:-D You are absolutely right. This one just begs for a sequel. It's great.
| the dark euphie chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Do we really have to beg and plead with you? I would love another chapter.
| Tsyilna Llyria chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
Lol i like how you went about this! Great idea and your right about wanting it to be continued it would be cool but its not necessary
| anonymous chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
Hi, I just want to start off by saying that this was a really sweet story. I hope you won't be offended by me critiquing bits of it though. I think you can greatly improve the story by not pointing out minute details like "the silk boxers hermione gave to Harry", or overindulge the sentences with too much detail. Also, Severus was slightly too out of character for my taste, unless that was what the desired result was.
But that was immensely cute :)
| MsIloveVampires chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
i really like this story 3 :D maybe you could post another chapter? but only if ur not busy :)
| ultimaterockgoddess chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
Love love love love it
| valeknyelena chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
You never cease to amaze me. Another brilliant story and, what can I say, we always want another chapter of anything you write.
| kasssumi chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
I love it that you have so many ideas for a story. You're my godness!
| yamifannetje chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
This was great! Realy great! I would so like to experience a similiuar thing myself once; the heat part might be skipped.
| Tilly chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Not really an M-rated story but it was enjoyable nonetheless; great job and even if it takes years to see more on this I'd be happy to wait for it.
| Penelope Elizabeth Anne Snape chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
This story was great and of course I would love another chapter(or ten ) lol) I think you are an awesome writer because your stories are fantastic and because you are always updating. Your terrific and one of my favorite authors!
Keep up the amazing work, I will be looking for updates!
| Evelyn-the-wiccan chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Great story :D