Reviews for The Forbidden Lorien: Number Eleven
ms.worldwide chapter 6 . 5/12/2014
Oh and just so you know, Ella would have been a mere baby at the time so there's no way they could've done all that stuff. It'd be more accurate if you put six or Marina in there
ms.worldwide chapter 3 . 5/12/2014
No offense or anything but you seriously need to check your spelling
TheCoffeeWriter chapter 8 . 7/20/2012
It's a really exciting story you have going there.

What I think is a pity, is the fact that the chapters are very short and the many spelling errors makes it difficult to understand.

Have you ever considered a beta reader? :)
If you decide to have one, then feel free to contact me.

Keep up the good work.
timberwolf22 chapter 5 . 9/25/2011
SPELLING! i do not understand
timberwolf22 chapter 3 . 9/25/2011
spelling was a prblem but it was good
timberwolf22 chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
okay it was good but o much like mine you have to put more stella in to it and you spelled forbidden wrong


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