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| Simple Shimmers chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
'no purberty yet?' That was hilarious. I wonder who it was. Oh not to be rude or something but remember to add more details not that you don't have any but a little more would be nice. Try to describe how people look in your persons point of view like what your persons impression of certain people are. Like Hikaru could hate Melinda or something that would add something to your character and she won't be a Mary Sue. (Not that she is)
Oops. . . I feel like a jerk for being picky. . .
But anyway. . ..' When is Taylor Greene (Green) gonna be introduced? You know the OC I suggested not that you have to or anything. I can't wait to see how Taylor is gonna meet Melinda.