WOW, Decius! I JUST had a chance to read the first four chapters, and WOW... This fic is SOO well thought out! I would NEVER have the patience for that much planning! (Or any planning at all, for that matter.) Keep up the great work, and I can't WAIT for the next chapter!

This story is fascinating. It's so full of emotion... very powerful. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time I was reading. I'm looking forward to your next update. I'm very interested to find out how Dru is connected to this Legion fellow, and what Buffy has to do with his search. Keep up the great work :)

Wow! What can I say? Your writing style is simply incredible. I love the flashbacks and I can't wait for more to be revealed! Decius you have a talent, please tell me that you will use it professionally because it would be such a waste if you don't! Anyway I am very much looking forward to the next installment :)

I love the ambience you create with your words. Everything is slow and deliberate and claws at me to read quicker. On an aesthetic note, it would be best if you divided up your time switches so they could be read a little clearer. Other than that, fascinating style. The title is perfect for the feel you have created for this story. Can't wait for the update.

This gets better and better. What I love most is the incredible sense of atmosphere you have achieved so far in this piece. I'm completely hooked, and desperate for more. Nice work.

Fabulous story! Can't wait for more.

This is such an interesting story - the plot twist of Drusilla is nice. You're style of language fits the story - Not only do your words paint the picture of Jur’Khan Chung's palace, but they evoke a feeling of the darkness inherent within it because of its inhabitants. Very nice. I'm looking forward to more.

Oooo, very nice. :O) I really like the tone of this piece, sombre and dark; I'm looking forward to reading more! Fantastic work thus far! :O)

WOW! Excellent start! I love it and can't wait to read more... Very well done! :)

This rocks. Please continue. Imagine that? (she says sarcastically) There's a whole world outside of Sunnydale!

This is really interesting. I can't wait to read more.

Ok, I'm hooked. Please write more, I can't wait to see where you're going to take this. These 2 chapters are a great start :)

Your imagery is amazing ... had me captivated with the first paragraph. Please continue. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm fascinated. This is an outstanding beginning for what looks to be an intriguing story.

Wow! you should really continue this! i love your stlye of writing and you're very descriptive! good job and keep writing!