|Reviews for The Kingdom Comes Again|
| Kordesha chapter 3 . 5/6
I know fanon loves to use ,the senshi transformation shows them naked, as a comedy plot point. I actually find it kinda irritating, as the transformation sequence actually has a light component that prevents any kind of naughty bits actually being seen. Other than that I'm enjoying the story so far
| Reykan chapter 10 . 1/24
Who boy, when ranma picks it up, you've really stepped in it.
| god of all chapter 18 . 1/23
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 18 . 1/22
Wow, that be some BIG hate from him:)
| Sora with an S chapter 18 . 1/20
Tux boy gets some golden screen time in! Yay! Also, the story isn't dead. Yay!
| xThomas2 chapter 1 . 1/18
Kinda bored after nineteen chapters. It moved too slow it doesn't have much action... There is some action, but it's not fulfilling. Story barely moves, most of the time is spent dealing with character interaction with each other. Maybe I'm just not in the mood and your story isn't good enough to entertain me when I'm not in the mood.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
Sounded cool but the first chapter was all OC's with a little bit of Sailor Moon and barely a hint of Ranma. It might be unfair but I have to assume if it starts that way then it will only get worse. if that's not the case then next time maybe you should not blast the OC's so heavily right at the start but introduce them more gradually and naturally.
| HopeSeiketsu chapter 5 . 6/3/2014
I would gladly pre read some of your stories if they are like this though I onpy have a tablet so I am not sure how well it would work out lols also if you send something to my email be sure to pm , e to let me know I responded faster that way
| HopeSeiketsu chapter 2 . 6/3/2014
Actually japanese for shadow is KOGA not kaga though I have been thinking koga everytkme I read it because kaga sounded stupid to me
| shugokage chapter 17 . 4/1/2014
Definitely a cool story good job!
| tarrangar chapter 6 . 2/17/2014
i agree but you would need high caliber bullets to give ryoga more than a flesh wound after his bakusai tenketsu training im sure bullets can hurt him but for them to go more than a centimeter in his flesh it would have to be either point blank or high caliber
| Compucles chapter 17 . 3/4/2013
I like this story. It has an excellent mix of comedy and serious situations, and your writing has improved a lot since the early chapters.
| Compucles chapter 9 . 3/4/2013
Glad to see this is a Ranma x Akane pairing. Even if you don't love the pairing like I do, they are the official pairing of the whole series.
Ranma has only ever had 3 fiancées, though (and Shampoo was mostly his own fault). Kodachi is merely a crazy stalker with no actual claim, Kaori is animé filler, and any other thoughts of Genma selling out Ranma's hand are pure fanon speculation
| Compucles chapter 4 . 3/2/2013
This is pretty good so far, but it is filled with several annoying technical errors. There are no scene breaks, you leave out most apostrophes, you capitalize words you shouldn't, you misspell certain names and terms like Mousse, Nodoka, and Hiryu Shoten Ha (these are the correct spellings), and you leave in plenty of other misspelled words and other typos. Also, it's extremely annoying to read a language teacher correcting grammar incorrectly; it should be "Ami and I." You really need to have a proofreader go through this thing, or at least turn spellcheck on while writing it.
By the way, Juban is an area of the Minato Ward of Tokyo, not the ward itself.
I do agree with you on Akane's skill level. She's a lot like Kaoru in Rurouni Kenshin, expert level among normal fighters (as long as she doesn't loose her focus) but outclassed by the "superhuman" fighters. She can beat Kodachi outside of her poisons (with which even Ranma has trouble), and she could probably beat Ukyo in unarmed combat.
| Eisenstein chapter 17 . 3/1/2013
Hey, it's great to see new chapters any way possible. Best wishes on writing on!