|Reviews for A Clean Getaway|
| Starfox5 chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
Sweet, romantic and fluffy, nicely done.
| Lol chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
| Penghost chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
A wonderful scene!
Quite innocent and playful.
You could fill out the scene a bit more with details of the surroundings and objects around.
Go a bit deeper in conversation and mimic etc.
In a few words : make the scenes more living.
It would pepper up the good framework and pictures.
Thanks for your time
| HP.HG. fan forever chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
I like this and can see the possibility of another chapter. Sex not required nor desired to continue this a nice little romance piece.
| codyw1 chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
| Makokam chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Fun sto- ... -facepalm- i just got the title. Very nice work there.
Anyway, this was a good story, but not all that great. It just seemed to lack something... some sort of payoff I guess... like it was cut out of a larger story.
It was still fun and an enjoyable story, it just made me wish there was more to it. But that's a compliment in an of itself isn't it?
| MoonlitSky321 chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
| madbrad chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
Very good. His recitation of all of Hermione's good qualities led very nicely into the kiss.
| happylady chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Great post, I loved it all!
Until next time