Reviews for Familiar and Unfamiliar Summonings
alanek2002 chapter 10 . 5/31/2014
It's Awesome to see that you are updating this again. .

And I admit I didn't think of Louise casting dispel on Jaeger. I can't see any problems in this update, and am waiting eagerly for more.

And Laughed a bit when Jaeger saw louise as a way to get uncursed... then she got kidnapped.
jwagne51 chapter 10 . 5/31/2014
sive. Is there any way I could convince you to begin verbally sparring with me again when we get back to school?"

"Is that what it was to you?" Louise said flatly, "A game?"

After this the rest is bold. great chapter also.
Nargus chapter 10 . 5/31/2014
Ahwahh! Evil cliffhanger! I was giggling at the "You're throwing people at me?!" part though.
Mkire chapter 10 . 5/31/2014
Dear sir, about halfway through the chapter the text becomes bold and does not return to normal.

With that aside, I am always happy to see more dungeon crawler.
Drexal15 chapter 3 . 5/31/2014
Heh magically funny
Drexal15 chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
Good job man, although, Optimus could have said something about the familiar symbol, well other than interesting.
Twigon chapter 10 . 5/31/2014
More Dungeon Crawling never fails to excite me. Glad to see this has been updated- it's also nice to see Jaeger back in action.
Moon Wolf 96 chapter 10 . 5/31/2014
Excellent chapter and I find myself wondering when you will be moving this set of the series to it's own independent posting.
Ibskib chapter 10 . 5/31/2014
Something's up with the formatting, the text starts being bolded a quarter through the chapter.
garoorar chapter 10 . 5/31/2014
Well, finally an update... and a cliffhanger too. This kind of story momentum needs to be remedied quickly!
AngelForm chapter 10 . 5/31/2014
I shall assume the bold is an error rather than a stylistic choice.

Louise taking her familiar’s sudden ability to talk without comment is rather odd. Especially as she had just commented on it being a problem.

So much for sense motive being a counter for bluff.

Forquet died from lightning I take it?
Gelasia Kidd chapter 10 . 5/31/2014
You are a talented and amazing writer and I am captivated.
wolfey141 chapter 10 . 5/31/2014
I love your familiar stories. My fav so far is with negi and optimus. I would love to see one with post sunnydale xander, podt war harry potter and sage naruto
TonalArchitect chapter 10 . 5/31/2014
This is awesome. Your awesome. Your combat is awesome. Your characterizations are awesome. The bit where the chapter suddenly went bold was weird though. Beyond that, keep up the great work! I eagerly await the next update.
AzureNemesis chapter 10 . 5/31/2014
Great chapter, I hope to see another one soon. Have you considered making this a full story?
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