Reviews for Secret
Bakamon chapter 1 . 8/13/2020
This was great. I always wished for more but never got any. I hope you're okay.
JustAFool chapter 1 . 5/22/2016
Interesting story. What did you think of the manga ending and the role they introduced into Elsee's past but then sort of dropped it and just quickly ended the manga in something like 2 chapters afterwards?
TheRedGhillie chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
Good story! This maybe a one-shot, but if it isn't I'd like to see more! Or at least another story with this character shipping involved!
Keep up the good work!
PaolaPaipa chapter 1 . 2/7/2014
This cant end like this
the main reason i stop reading the manga was for tenri i hate that silly bitch ;_;
SAmaster01 chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
A bit sad, and inconclusive, but well written. Good job.
JumbilyWobbly chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
A little late but I hope I'm not too late, loved this mature Elsi, so in touch with her feelings, so strong, enduring the pain of having a forbidden love, just ugh! This just made me so mad! Elsi deserves so much better! Grr! This just pissess me off!
TheDaemonthor chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
waah Dx
thechat chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
This was a great one shot. Now, I'm sure you wanted it to have an open ending, but can I get your opinion on what will happen next? Thanks.
KiwiNiki chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Poor Elsee! I ship these two so hard ~ :D
Death God Raven chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
I quite like, I wish I would have been a longer history.

but the story was very good.

Greetings from the great darkness.
Lenore4L chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I love this pairing ahhhhhhhhhh i love this fic ahhhhhhhhhh i love it more if there will be a next chapater XDDD

Sorry for my bad english
Moocow chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
Huh. I found that ending... rather sad. Good work, but very sad.
Alewar Warinot chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
It's completely perfect for your genre! I give it 4 stars out of 5. Nothing more to add but it was so sad. then you ended it with the usual gimmick in TWGOK.
Lord Alania chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
It is a good story. Characterization was fine and the ending, though a bit anticlimactic was cool.
Wrathie Winsre chapter 1 . 9/25/2011

You deserve a review. I like this story, I like the development and i think you potrayed the idea very well.

The Elsi was spot on and you seem to be reading my thoughts on the situation.

Thank you for convincing me that there is someone out there who have the same thoughts as me on that idea.


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