|Reviews for This Is What Stress Can Do|
| waterbade chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
Very sad, still I think you captured the "spirit" of the book well. Only one question: Who are you writing about? The main character I s'pose? I wish you would write a little more to it, explain more, make some smoother transitions in emotion for example. :)
| too lazy to log in chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
I loved this and I wonder if a doctor will see.
| lostdisguise chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
This sounds like it could be much more than a one-shot. You could actually turn this into a very good story, with this chapter being the prologue. It was very good, though a little confusing at times. The sentences flowed rather well, though a few words inserted in and maybe a rearrangement of a few of them would smooth things along.
It actually saddens me that this is the only story I found for Cut. I might give it a go - and will probably even create a forum for it! Sounds like a great idea, huh? (Questioning what I mean? Feel free to send me a pm.) Anyways, I hope you continue this, but if not, I hope you post more soon.