Reviews for Substitution
breadboi chapter 1 . 12/1/2014

I don't know what to think of this.

Shiemi is dumb to fall for it though...

Its freaking creepy.
Otaku Rabbit chapter 1 . 5/16/2014
So touching that I'm actually crying.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
:O That was so confusing, and evil, but it made perfect sense.
Well written
winter lodge chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
So awesomely done. Goes to fav :)
sakura-fai chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
D'; what if Rin came back as a ghost and...
SamuraiWannabe chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
uh, this is soooo sad... I know it's harsh for yukio.. but... uhhhh _ like your story! thumbs up~ b
Kiyoshi Kitana chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
Intriguing concept! I like your style. :)
0jadecat0 chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
This has got to be the most interesting thing I have ever read, you can get so much out of this plot idea! Like...woah. It's simply amazing. It was short, but straight to the point and that's what made this so good, the fact that you wrote a whole freaking story in a few sentences. This is great. If you ever feel inclined to writing a multi-chaptered fic about this, I'll surely read it.
Prieva chapter 1 . 9/25/2011

This is deliciously sad, and creepy.
StepByStep chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
Well, that was certainly depressing. Seeing Yukio think that he has to be his twing just shows how he is dead inside... Good job.

Keep it up!