|Reviews for Candy Baby|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/8
That was actually REALLY GOOD. I thought "how in the world does sugar candy lead to sex?" And this was just executed very well.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2014
| xmoonlightxblossomx chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
Oh my gosh more please! Can we please have more of this pairing?
| DeathlySilentKiss chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
There aren't as many stories like this anymore i read this ages ago when it first came out and i didn't
review cuz i didn't have any account and was losing focus on fanfiction but seriously
GOOD JOB ON THE STORY!
AWESOME ONE SHOT ;)
| Amu-chii chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
please make more NagihikoxRima lemons
| xRoguexRavenx chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
It's kind of a funny thought of a tall person having sex with a tiny person.
| Jahdeea Small chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
That was a cute story!
| AnimeLuv0946 chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
I LUV IT!
| Fabulous as FCUK chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
| silver-chan 3 chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
aha love it!
keep writing, you're very good at it :)
LOL I CAN TOTALLY SEE RIMA GETTING ADDICTED TO CANDY, DON'T WORRY!
actually, if you're really worried, you can drop a small comment in the first section about maybe something to do with Yaya convincing her to go, or really anything that says you acknowledge Yaya and her sugar obsession ;D
| seiun chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Your writing style is unique~
| WeDidItForTheDead chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
The story/ plot was very cute. The lemon was... erotic. Better than your others. The mental image was delicious... but now I feel dirty. You corrupt me pure mind :P I really do like your writing style.
| Me XD chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Awesome rimahiko lemon! Make more soon!
| flippednique chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
I read this last night and wanted to review but couldn't cause I wasn't in the mood or the correct mind set to give you a review you deserved... but now I AM so let's get started .
First off, grammar and spelling.
I saw no mistakes other than in this passage:Rima couldn't help but smirk at this, until she felt his hands rise underneath her the hem of her shirt and push her bra upwards...
Yeah, I think you meant to say "Rima couldn't help but smirk at this, until she felt his hands rise underneath THE hem of her shirt and push her bra upwards...
You wrote it beautifully and it gave me a centralized image. I'm pretty sure I read it more than twice (cause of that PERVERTED side of me) and I pictured the scene vividly. Unlike during Bijou and Drunken Encounters- I more or less see another scene whenever I reread it.
also-! I noticed you have patterns. :D
In Drunken Encounters and Bijou- it was Rima/Yaya who got teased with Nagi/Kukai prodding them with their fingers. But here in Candy Baby/ and probably that ice cream fic, it will be Kukai/Nagi who gets teased :D
About that Amuto Lemon- don't be worried if you can't finish it- there are ENOUGH Amuto Lemons out there I am actually very thankful that you write RimaHiko so well. I am indebted to you for some reason i don't understand. LOL
I'll be waiting for more neh~
| BunnyQueenLivesForever chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
I liked it it was hot! :D