|Reviews for Be Like Water|
| TishPhoenix chapter 42 . 11/22
I really loved this story, Thanks for writing it, and sharing it with. It's a great fic. One of my faves and definitely worth reading, a few times. I'm not sure if I have ever left a review or not but this is really amazing work.
Most of the time Bella adapts and so much of her character becomes far stretched from the General heart of what makes her, well.. Bella. Sometimes its needed for the fic, depending on what the fic entails. But so often the original nature that is relate-able and pulls the reader in, (woman wise) feels lost as one might read.
Not here though. In some ways, she changes. The character matures differently with pack than with Vampire based stories. Here you showed that expertly without changing what defined Bella's character.
I also want to mention the progression of the climax and turning point of conflict in this fic. You offered great insight to this fic from several point of views with out it feeling as if there was a tug of war in the process. It flowed easily, transitioned from one point of view to the next without drawing anything out too long, or cutting to the quick and leaving things feeling deflated as I read.
It was one of the most original ideas I've ever read, and hence why its on one my personal list of a great work that I can read over and over. Thanks again for writing. It was great.
I especially loved how you tied in the very thing that got Paul distracted while searching for Bella during the twist, and conflict, as the epilogue. Beautifully done all around.
| TinaF chapter 42 . 10/4
Wow fantastic story. Loved every chapter.
| Evie Starberry chapter 42 . 9/25
Read it again. Still love it. Going to sequel now, hope it's finished or close to it, love that story.
| ec.blaiseluver chapter 42 . 9/24
This is definitely one of my favorite Paul/Bella stories. I've read it multiple times and enjoy it every time. :)
| xXMoonlitSorrowsXx chapter 42 . 9/12
Love love LOVE this story! It's so great. I like how it wasn't the usual imprinting story. Great job!
| sarah88 chapter 31 . 9/5
OMG! That totally sounds like something some children would do. LOL
| sarah88 chapter 22 . 9/5
Does Paul mean in regards of Ted or all the Cullen's?
| Guest chapter 42 . 8/26
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| xxxMissTrueLovexxx chapter 42 . 8/10
Wow I absolutely loved your story! It was my first Paul and Bella story, but I think I'm hooked :P
Great writing! Hope to read some more stories from you :)
| anon chapter 23 . 7/28
LIKE SERIOUSLY. i does not matter how many times I read this chapter. It's so fcking cool!
| sweetness4683 chapter 42 . 7/14
| astridt244 chapter 17 . 7/14
Ugh, Leah... Such a butt.
The part where Bella calmed Paul was amazing. Loved it.
| astridt244 chapter 16 . 7/14
The image you painted of the vamp and wolf running was epic. Loved it.
Poor Paul. So scared to hurt her.
| astridt244 chapter 15 . 7/13
I like her emotional development here. Once she accepted the bond, it was like she blossomed more. Still insecure, but growing more into herself.