Paul...

Is your goal to make me cry? Because I feel like the way Bella is described in the end of this chapter. I have years in my eyes and I never cry! God I love this book...

Can I just say, that the end where everything is tense and Paul is angry, Jake is angry, Sam is angry, everybody is angry, and the way they talked? That was extremely hot. Also, this is a great story!

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I have been reading this non stop for my SECOND time, mind you and I still cant be bothered with anyone or anything else due to my avid compulsion to read every last word unto the end. . . You have a fantastic talent and are a real gem among FF writers, please know that I will never burn out on these stories involving these specific characters so its safe to say that there are many more readers out there that feel the same way. Much love from Indiana, Ash

this was really well written, I really enjoyed it!

(I apologize in advance for my bad spelling, I don't speak English) Okay... I just finished reading this, and I MUST say it's one of the best Paul/Bella fics I've read. I loved how he tried to stay away from her, how he was "good" with her but fierce towards the world, how he was still him. I also loved how Bella became stronger with him, a woman, as you say it in some chapters, and how she found the strength to keep on living. If she hadn't met Paul, I'm sure she would have given up on her live when Darkward (I think that's how they call this kind of Edward) kidnapped her.

By the way, he just sounds SO "gay" on his first appearance. I was laughing so hard at him, and at the contrast between the wolves and the vampires...

I loved this story. Thank you for write it, Author.

Such a beautiful story! Thanks! I'll definitely have to check out your other stories.

Wow your story was amazing I had the best 3 days reading it ! Thank you so much for this, I can't wait to read another one of yours !

OMG I love you so much for creating this FF. I mean DAAMMNN you just rock it, it is the best Paul/Bella that I had ever read. And you writed this sooo good, almost perfect. You just don't know how much I love reading this. Omg and the part where Jasper looks at Bella and tells those pretty things about how good it could had been a relationship or how much he appreciates her I almost run to read one jasper/Bella, it made me crave for one FF of them. And that epilogue was the most hilarious/ beautiful thing ever. I mean I really love this, I congratulate you for been the author of such an amazing FF and for you writing skills they are the best. I hope you write more Paul/Bella because you just got yourself a fan.
Pd: sorry for my terrible English.

This was best paul and bella ever! I cried and gasped and clapped and cheered...should be a movie...thank You for this.

This was so good.

I loved this story so much. Far more than I actually expected to. It was a phenomenal story for one of my favourite pairings. So thank you for taking the time to write this.

aw, such a lovely end to a great fic :)

The most amazing fic I read ever! Love it! Good job!