Reviews for Be Like Water |
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![]() ![]() aw, such a lovely end to a great fic :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The most amazing fic I read ever! Love it! Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow!amazing! |
![]() ![]() This was the most amazing paul and bella storyvive ever read! You kept the character personalitys and its was just wow! I loved paul he is definately the masculine, raging, but gentle kind of wolf well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your so amazing for a writer I've read and read your stuff over and Over! Wish you wrote more! |
![]() ![]() This made me cry |
![]() ![]() ![]() fuddie-duddie.. i dying of laughter! lollololoolollo |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I want a little girl who wants to paint my house green like the trees." awww!ijthjlyr |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish it were possible to give more than just a favorite. You made a great story out of this paiiring and it seems to be my favorite of all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why is she able to kiss another wolf?should she not have a bad reaction if she were intimate with another wolf even though she is human? one more thing Jacob is a selfish obsessed prick knowing that Paul is her wolf and he just flaunts his obsession in front of him,which Sam doesn't do anything to stop.I imagine he feels entitled since he is the next chief and Alpha.I hope the f*ck he would imprint on someone,hopefully it is some random guy. LOL . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Two questions: what in the hell is Paul's one, why in the f*ck is Sam letting Jake mess with another wolves imprint since the whole pack knows he has imprinted on her why in the f*ck isn't someone pounding the shit out of Jake for breaking the only major law of the pack,do not get in between a wolf and his imprint? need some explanations soon,please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The title of this chapter should be'' Losing it'' not ''Loosing it''.not sure where you are from,but i have noticed that writers from the U.K.,Australia and other commonwealth countries for some reason do not know the difference between lose and just a pet peeve of mine. |
![]() ![]() Daaaaamn. Perfect title to the chapter. By the end of it, before I saw the title, I said to myself "shit got real." It feels very natural how the stakes are building without being unsupported, flimsy or a leap of faith by the reader. |
![]() ![]() I REALLY like how you handled this triangle aspect. It felt like you wrote it through in a way that was really in line with your overall theory. It makes it really easy to get into the story and not feel like one of the characters is going to act crazy. It really works. The parallel scenes could have been formatted better but that's just the medium. Looking forward to keep reading! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I literally read this story at least once a month. Amazing. Favorite. Eye opening |