Reviews for Be Like Water |
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![]() ![]() ![]() no no no no no this is a nightmare indeed :'( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love emily so so so much she's like Paul's mother, and I'm dying to know how paul will react i hope they kiss :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() He made me cry - yom made me cry - he have such a beautiful soul |
![]() ![]() ![]() that sun of a bitch! I'm gonna kill jake : |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god! My poor paul :'( |
![]() ![]() ![]() that's an awesome start i always love when everything starts from the slap and that's exactly what drew me in to the story :D and that I'm a Paul shipper lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely lovely. What a journey and relationship, nicely written! |
![]() ![]() Probably the best Twilight fanfic I have ever read, like everrrrrrr |
![]() ![]() I absolutely love the perspective change in the chapter. Jasper's thoughts make Paul seems so intriguing, with the inner rage contrasting the outer cool. And it makes it all the more dramatic that it takes a while before they piece together that 'the man' is Paul, Bella's mate. And I absolutely love that you had him tear his head off with so much ease. Coolest chapter in the story |
![]() ![]() This was a great story, and Paul and Bella were both very likable characters! That's always my most important thing |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are a great writer, very keen on the details...love the story so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME STORY! thanks for the beautiful journey! :D |
![]() ![]() Cute ending! |
![]() ![]() SOOOOOOOO GREAT! one of the best fics I have ever read. Very talented! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was so heart breaking :( |