I loved it! It is a well written and creative story. Like everything by taoist elf.

My god I think this is one of the best stories ever written. Thank you for all of your hard work and leaving it up so we can read it!

Jacob had no right taking Bella from Paul she is not his mate! He should of left her in Paul's arms and helped Paul into the house. Sorry Emily no you don't understand what Paul feels Bella was beaten to death by a vampire you got hurt by Sam and were not near death you nor Sam know what Bella or Paul is feeling

Me encantooo

Still love this story. The poetry of the descriptions and the beauty of the words are so descriptive and portray the plot with a depth not found often. Thanks for sharing!

One of my all time favorite fics! Words cannot express just how much I love this story! Thank you!

loved this so much

You are really talented with your words! No grammar error and It's incredibly rare to find fanfics (and completed) like this especially on a non-canon pairing.

Although one thing to point out, almost makes me want to stop reading at times.. is that your descriptions get too overwhelming and repetitive , not that they aren't written well if you know what I mean. Like say ,the scenes with the pack are bursting through the pages with the testosterone ,more so than could be required. What could require a a simple paragraph and still be powerful sometimes is punctuated with some placeholder dialogue and it spoils the flow. And Bella is almost either crying or just needing Paul through the chapters , and then suddenly she is strong enough to stand up to the alpha of the pack. I don't see the consistency in her character. Not that she has to be some badass Mary Sue, but she's got to have more personality that that. She lets herself get pulled around by all the men and women around her. How is this different from what happened with the Cullens? Maybe that's what you intended but just that's just what I've noticed so far.

But you write well enough to leave the reader intrigued at every chapter, I'm just in chapter 24 , so there could be development.

This was so good. I loved the characters!

I do not know if you still write or not. But you are totally my favorite. I just wanted to tell you that because I was browsing since I couldn't find this other story I was looking for *I think it might be a Bella and Embry pairing not a Bella Paul one but it's been so long I forgot* when I came across this magnificent gem. A few trip ups once in a blue moon but nothing too bad as far as being able to read it. Anyways. Thank you for this amazing story. I seriously hope you are an actual writer because you certainly have a gift.

This was beautiful

This was amazing. Such a great writer

Beautiful story, loved it. Thank you

Absolutely loved it !

I finished reading and forgot to comment. i know this has been finished for awhile, but I am just now getting around to reading it. I love your work. It is complex and thoughtful, and different. Thank you for writing.