Reviews for Be Like Water |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aww...Paul was just precious in the beginning. He really doesn't think he is good enough. I have a feeling that Bella is going to disagree with him. Maybe her love can make Paul love himself. He really needs to. I loved him when he said this: "Fuck yeah, I feel it," his gaze was intense and absolutely sincere. "I feel it bad, babe." |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seeing them seal the bond was just perfect. I was giddy with excitement that it was in this chapter. Paul was so adorable trying to go easy on her. It was just beautiful. You made them perfect together. He was so tortured in the beginning of the chapter tying not to ravish her. Bless his heart. He got his reward for all that work at restraining himself. I loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bella is on a mission. It is pretty clear what that mission is. Get to Paul ASAP! Wonderful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This part was so fantastic: "If I hurt her…I'll let you," Paul whispered and his shoulders deflated as his blind rage receded to uncover far more complex and dangerous emotions. "But promise me this, Jake. Promise me," he choked in a plea of dark desperation. Jacob's brow shot up as he took a confused step back. "If she walks away… if she doesn't want me, then you'll kill me too." Paul is so agonized and full of despair. I just want Bella to make all his pain go away. You make him so easy to love. *sigh* |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was such a pleasure to read. It was exquisite! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I totally loved how you showed what was happening to Paul in one line and then what was happening to Bella in the next. Very nice! At least Jacob knows he tried his best. Poor guy. I just hope that Paul comes to see Bella soon. She must be feeling pretty low. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww Jacob is so precious. I hope it doesn't hurt him too bad when he sees the girl he loves in the arms of Paul. Anyone who knows me knows that I love Jacob a lot, but I am pulling for Paul! He deserves some love. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is just the tip of the iceberg. I have a feeling your Paul is so amazingly complicated. I sure am enjoying this! Sam and Emily were perfect together in this chapter. I want that for Paul and Bella too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That had my heart pounding! They are so intense! I can't wait to see what happens when they really give themselves to each other. This part was just beautiful! Bella's heart skipped at the unmitigated tenderness in his gaze – it showcased a vulnerability as extreme as his anger and severity. In that instant she understood -beyond a doubt- that this was a profoundly sensitive man who had gotten the caring literally beaten out of him. *sigh* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh poor Seth and Leah! They are lucky to have the other members of the pack to help them. I feel so sorry for Paul. He really needs some relief. I know it must be torture for him to know that Jacob can be with Bella while he can't. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was such a sweet chapter. Emily is in a great position. She hears Paul's side of things and it looks like she might get to hear Bella's side. She can play both sides to get them together. Hopefully... Can't wait to see what happens when Paul knows she came to his house. His wolf will have a fit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Paul has so much pain. I just want Bella to kiss him and make it all better. I love that Emily is his friend. He sure needs one. I can just see Jacob going ballistic when Paul imprinted. lol. It made me so happy that Paul was the one who killed Laurent. That was a special touch. I loved this part: After Paul had single-handedly dismembered the dreadlocked leech, Jacob had tried his very best to do the same to Paul himeslef. He might have been successful too - since Paul's wolf was whimpering and crawling like a fucking wuss after Bella who was stumbling home. What a fantastic visual! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww Jacob is so cute trying to win her over. He was so sweet. It seems like he knows deep inside that it won't work. That worried pucker of his brow is a signal. It's going to be interesting to see what happens when she gets close to Paul again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I love reading Paul's struggle to handle the imprinting. Poor guy really didn't want to imprint on Bella. Jacob is so "Jacob" trying to protect her. Paul's reaction to Bella when she squealed was just awesome. You do such a good job telling us how he is feeling, there is no doubt as to what is going on. Your characters have such depth. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you said you don't need reviews, but I wanted to let you know how much I appreciate your reposting this story. I kept hearing from my fanfiction friends how awesome this is, so I naturally wanted to read it. Thanks! I sure look forward to the journey! |