| Reviews for Be Like Water |
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  Guest chapter 20 . 2/22/2019 Ugh...I hate how you made the Cullens act like creeps. You're definitely team wolf. |
| Guest chapter 18 . 2/22/2019 Paul's last name is Lahote. Bella was born in September, not April. |
| Guest chapter 16 . 2/22/2019 I'll be so annoyed if you make Edward and the Cullens the hbad guys. |
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/22/2019 This is such a weird pairing. I have nothing against Paul, but Sam would have been a better choice for Bella. |
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/22/2019 I miss the gentlemanly Edward. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2019 I have reread this story so many times. I love it so much. It had a bit of a rocky start for me, but honestly by chapter 4 I’m hooked, and I love the relationship between Paul and Bella. I finished it again last night, and am about to restart it. It leaves me wanting more everytime. |
 leoslady4ever chapter 42 . 11/2/2018 I read this one straight through. I literally couldn't put it down! Thank you so much for such an exciting and emotional read! It'll definitely be making it to my favorites list! |
| RuneMarauder189 chapter 42 . 10/17/2018 I loved this story so much! |
| Guest chapter 42 . 9/6/2018 Amazing, I loved it. |
| winterqween chapter 42 . 8/3/2018 Amazing. |
| MiccaF chapter 41 . 7/31/2018 I love this more every time I read it! Awesome as always! |
| rachel625 chapter 42 . 7/27/2018 Such an incredible read! I loved the bond between Paul and Bella. and how they could feel each other and communicate with one another. Definitely did NOT like what Edward did. Thank you for the great read! |
| ajadventurer chapter 30 . 6/18/2018 Hey my dear! This story is amazing, its my third read through over the course of a few years, I totally love it. Just a small bone to pick, nothing huge or anything, but the first two times I read this story, I was decidedly a civilian. This third read through is just as entertaining as the last two, however, now as military personnel, the nomenclature of the word debrief is more apparent to me. To be clear, debriefing is something that happens AFTER an event. You can't debrief someone something until after it has happened. In any sort of planning environment, you BRIEF something. I know it has been years since you wrote this, and it remains one of my favorites, absolutely. Its so artfully written and entertaining as hell. Thank you for taking the time to provide the world with this beautiful piece of art. Much love to you -AJ |
| MoondustPrincess21 chapter 42 . 6/13/2018 this was amazing! the best paul/bella fic I have read and I was laughing so hard at that last chapter |
| Lolamay2017 chapter 1 . 6/8/2018 Paul is so ugh |