Cute cute cute!

Very cute!

I think my biggest problem with this story is that the grammar needs some help.. :T I was fixing things in my head as I went along and it took away from the story. Also...I felt that it was rather rushed. I mean, it was a funny concept and that's why I finished it but it could've been drawn out a little bit so that the readers could follow more clearly what's going on.

So...that's my review? Keep writing! :D