Reviews for Toh Shin Den II: Thicker Than Water
Alaiya chapter 14 . 12/16/2004
Okay, I know you're probably never going to read this but I'll say it regardless:

This would be a pretty good fic, as would the rest of your trilogy, except for one thing that's highly irritating. This is the excessive amount of fangirl Japanese you use. Sprinking your stories with "ne", "na", "baka", -"chan", "-sama" and so on does not make you any more clever then the ten million other fangirls out there who do the same thing.
Jun chapter 14 . 8/18/2004
Nifty story, you write very well and you expanded the story and actually made fight scenes interesting.

My only qualms are as follows: Space writing. That makes it kinda hard to read when it's all clumped together. Also, Master is a boy, not a girl. This has been proven. He's also known as 'Prince Master'.
Shoiryu chapter 1 . 5/1/2002
XD Happens to be Katzy. Hee. I just have to mention that I STILL love that Kayin's bit starts with the screaming of obscenities. It's just so... fitting. Mweeheehee!
Yuffie143 chapter 14 . 4/30/2002
This was my favorite out of the triology...soo awesomee