|Reviews for The Spark|
| Balloonicorn chapter 1 . 2/12
This was hilarious and super cute!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/25
Totally inappropriat and... HILARIOUS!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/5
The part when he seemed genuinely concerned for his reputation ("Do I come across as the sort of guy who gets off on lepers?") just killed me. Thanks for this read, hope you have more like this!
| Little Gem Magnolia chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
I really enjoyed reading this. Rapunzel's grandmother's concern is founded for royalty and the time, Rapunzel's naive actions in turn are priceless and Eugene's reaction to her fears is adorable. This couple is so cute and you've definitely done them justice.
| Dazed Blue chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
I loveeee thissss; you're the first writer i've encountered that wrote for this couple and i must say, originally i never thought about reading fanfictions for tangled, but you have greatly conjured a desire within me to humor this couple-amazzinggg! And i must say ,the leprosy idea was completely off the hook unsuspecting but brilliant, hahaha, i laughed at the idea and even harder when i read the line,"Do I come across as a guy who gets off on lepers?"
-Way too good. Hahaha
| IchigoYume chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
Oh. My. Gawd. Seriously, hilarious. The leper thing, being 'terribly contagious' or whatever, I literally died laughing. You write so awesomely, and I can always picture the scene in my head, thank you for that. I can go to work now and laugh to myself like a crazy person.
| Neon-Night-Light chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
Haha I loved this! I love how you capture Raunzel and Flynn's characters and how freaking adorable they are and the leprosy part heheheh amazingly written story!
| Trumpet-Geek chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
I like how you somehow captured the Disney-esque ambiance but made it more...uhhhh...more xD
| cloudreamer11 chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
So weird. But I love it!
| hatakevan chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
OMG! A leper?! i laughed so hard! this is definitely one of my top 3 favourite stories on fanfiction ever!
| NamakiDeiation chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
O my gawd! I was in friggin HESTERICS! this is PERFECT! XD
| Dude Lika Ninja chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
Haha, the leper thing just about made me pee myself form laughing. Hilarious, great job with this.
| JayLaw chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
A leper!? Oh, I DIED right then and there! THAT was FUNNY! How sweet and adorable those two are! Nice job! Good story, and great writing!
| Amanthya chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
I can't believe I forgot to review this. It's hilarious! Rapunzel's creative misunderstandings, as well as her grandmother's confused notion of what their marriage should be, and Eugene's reactions...and the dialogue was perfect, you really captured their voices.
His kink-suggestion was so something I could see him actually saying. The numbers thing for her suprised me, but the heights-things so did not.
I'm reading this in bed on my notebook, trying not to laugh too loudly so I don't wake up my husband, but it's hard-there are so many funny lines!
It's so funny that Rapunzel almost talked w/ him right away and thus avoided all this sillyness. But of course, she didn't. I also really liked Eugene's reasoning, wanting Rapunzel to go at whatever pace suits her, since she's so young and new to this. It's thoughtful, and seems like something he'd do-epecially since she's up for it anytime, what does he have to complain about? Every man's fantasy.
At least until 10 years from now, right? Btw, nice touch including that palance-life being good to her line. It's a forgotten fact that royalty gets some pretty fine food, and when you add that to nature maturing, it has an effect. Luckily, it's a look that Rapunzel wears well.
| MidnightRosebud chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
The grandmother was an absolute crack up, but I was just about falling out of my chair in laughter at Rapunzel's thoughts of being forbidden a leper. THAT was hysterical. XD