Reviews for And that's when the bombs went off
Ashigirl3040 chapter 1 . 12/23/2015
I liked this version a lot! Do u think u could do a short story about what if Finnick never died? Thanks!
Alpha chapter 1 . 12/2/2015
Slight problem (besides minor stuff like grammar, etc): Katniss effectively put herself on Coin's radar, which she admittedly already was...but this way, it's guaranteed Katniss is gonna get assassinated and it promptly blamed on surviving Loyalists.
Though I'm glad Coin is portrayed as evil here.
Heslen chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
I don't think Coin would have admitted to attempted murder of Portion so easily, I also don't think Katniss would have said it that way, she would have been more like, "YOU WITCH! YOU TRIED TO KILL MY SISTER! HOW DARE YOU! I SHOULD KILL YOU RIGHT NOW!"
But it's your story so, I liked it.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Add another chapter when Katniss messes up Coin's FACE and is like "You bitch you tried to kill my sis! Say goodbye to LIFE!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
please continue this story
aurebesh chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
I like it, keep up the good work.
amber von tussle chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
I love this! Please write more! I am thinking of writing a story where Prim's alive, but I'm too lazy to get round to it haha.
KAnders4198 chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Write more it is good!
BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
A great story. Very well written.
FinnickOdair-Will-Live-Forever chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
Yeah, I meant to put in the authers note that the charecters might be OC. I didn't think it would matter so much as it's only a one-shot.
xoStillAnInnocent chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
It's good, writing wise. But all of them are rather out of character