Reviews for Taking Care of The Sick
orangutan33 chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
Hey hey hey...
Ideas...:D
Can I request? :)
What about tentacles?...
But...please let Steve be the bottom always..:D
Thank kyu of uploading this...:)
PadmeSkywalker10 chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
Nice story. I like cuddly Steve and Danno.
Jazmingirl chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
wow amazing story
tanya13 chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
i thought the story was great! and your English perfectly fine! thanks for giving me a nice little afternoon break ;)
SaKuRa-MIna chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
That was cute. Sick! Steve is adorable. Great job.
vaunie5962 chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
For a first one, really good job.

And you say your English is bad? I don't think so! You wrote better than me when I'm translating my texts from French to English so no, it's really good :-)
nightstalker63 chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
it was good i would have taken steve's temperature if he looked like he had a high fever and kissing somebody when they have been sick yuck bad breath you did great you keep writing i wil keep reading oh i love them too
LoveMarines chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Wow, for a first slash story, you definitely got the anatomy right :D

And I like how you wrote the two boys, they were very well characterized.

As for your English, you can only improve by writing more stories, right? ;) Liked it a lot, looking forward to reading more from you! :)

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Sweetpea chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
Good story for your first try for Hawaii 50. I also would like some loving between Steve and Danny on the show. But It will never happen. You do have some mistakes but a beta could help you with that.
francis2 chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
Having sex on a fever seems very hard work for me, but they managed just fine.