what makes them think that they can make her more powerful then naruto in three years when he can already wipe the floor with her now? did they just think that he would sit around for three years not getting stronger himself? how foolish of them.

Minato is a sick fuck thinking that about Tsubaki

That scene with Orochimaru and Jin was gold.

you were probably a young teenager when you wrote this...probably not likely to read this but whatever.

This is very edgy and kind of boring...pfsht...I am laughing at the medicore smut scenes and Naruto claiming to be a an avenger...the whole getting sharingan from the blood donation is just a cheap random power up...this is just plain ridiculous...I mean turning haku into a girl for no reason and the whole haku-chan shit...sorry but that is cringy. There was no point in changing Haku's sex

I mean the whole pissed off disturbing sleep joke is lame since that just shows naruto lack of ability, no traps to kill off the lame low level bandits while he sleeps and almost let those two random people died. You could have those bandits screaming in pain from getting catch in a bear trap or something before naruto kill them for waking him up but nope he almost let two people he was supposed to be guarding almost died due to sleeping and being lazy...

The whole letting the gato go free is just lame since naruto Sister or whatever her name is should have been pissed or angry at least or their teacher should have inform the hokage of this. I mean naruto is trying to be all edgy and shit so he could just pretend to be nice to Gato and cut his head off to earn browny point. Free fame basically and to look like a nice guy, I mean that cold behaviour will ring warning bells to people duh...but meh I am sure they will totally let this cold nature slide right?

the incest stuff is meh since that is probably your and other people fetish...I don't judge lol.

I mean there are worse fanfic and people probably enjoy this fic. But hey if you enjoy writing this thing then good for you but yeah there are kind of plot holes and this Naruto-in-name-only is very edgy and pretty much always win most of the right so it will piss some people off.

This is actually the second time I've read this story.
I just finished 'Everyone Has Darkness' and started its second part, so I thought: "why not a second run?".
And - oh boy - you are a crazy fella. I don't even want to know how twisted your mind must be to write something like this. Which I have enjoyed immensely, thank you very much!
Once upon a time I ignored 'Everyone Has Darkness'. The catchphrases grew annoying really fast and I quit shortly after Dante's fight; too many crossover elements kinda kill my enthusiasm.
But that was then and this is now.
I tried again and in the end I liked the story, quite so actually.
Reading them back to back I can say without a doubt that I love 'Way of the Rattlesnake' and it is one of my all time favourite.
Jin's character and cunning are entertaining and he doesn't get boring despite him being kind of overpowered. "Kind of" because he has so many strong powers... but he gets by without them. I cannot tell you how much I appreciate the fact he does not spam Mangekyō techniques like in so many other stories...
Anyway. The other characters do their job, noone really got on my nerves, the plot twists are good and Obito's end is deliciously savage.

Overall a great story and I hope to read more of you in the future.

Ya’know what else always pisses me off? Konoha never NEVER gets destroyed in fanfictions where Naruto is supposed to get ‘revenge’. What the hell man?

Based on the reviews below, the fact you make incest a big thing in this story is rather disgusting. If you were writing a pure erotic fanfiction? Go right ahead. But in a novel...? No. Love interests dont belong in the life of a shinobi. Training to survive in a war torn world where betrayal is around every corner? Where is the character building? How can you possibly attain revenge when thoughts of love interests are invading your mind? You cannot have any attachments if you were to betray your village. Idiot.

best best fanfiction I've ever read

I know i am late but fuck that was a good chapter

i started reading this story and it started good but later it got worse and worse i mean all your female characters are horny sluts who only think about fucking naruto and the bigest of them all is his sister. Who is the worst character i ever saw, i mean as soon as naruto show up she stoped hangging out with sasuke who she was friends with for years just to go fuck naruto, real friend ha. and tells him becouse he cant move on from revenge while naruto is alot worse not to mantion when she learns all the horrible things he did she just dissmises them I just prayed naruto or someone will kill her of while i readed and i lasted bearllyy to chapter 14 and i am out

Sasuke, the fucking bastard.

I'm don't fuck people. I fuck with their minds instead. Much more amusing... though it earned me the nickname "Sadist Bastard."

Anko has a fetish for Naruto.

I just finished ur story. Good to finally see a bad guy Naruto with a still good Naruto ending. Ur mind is a maze that seems about as fuck up as this Naruto's was. How do u make scenes funny is beyond me. Good job by the way. I love it read it in two days. U sir should be making movie scripts. Thank u for taking the time to make a story for me to laugh at. An the part where tsubaki stabbed Sasuke an he went out like a boss. Classic. ️

I must say I loved this novel. I enjoy all types of fanfiction plots but it gets easy to get lost up in "good guys always win", which can make many stories very predictable. This story is a breath of fresh air instead, and not one I think I would be able to reread, because what makes it one of the best stories I've read is the sheer unpredictable nature of the plot and rereading it defeats that a little. Thank you for making this story and I give my kind regards for your future work.