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ДаркНаруто фанфики это мой фаворит )

Один момент правда резанул глаза... у твоего Наруто было брутальное детство как и положено любому порядочному даркнаруто фанфику, но сам он поясняет это говоря что jiji-san не имел для него времени чаще раза в неделю т.к. был сильно занят. Но по твоей истории 4 жив и вполне здоров вместе с Кушиной и сестрой Наруто так что логично предположить что он всё ещё Хокаге... Вопрос в том ЧЕМ тогда был занят старик 3 Хокаге?

This seems pretty good but 1st POV is quite annoying and hard to follow sometimes, I hope future chapter will be 3rd person.

Aside from that, this is awesome.

...but several questions pop up.

The first is what does Naruto plan to do about his sister? Kill her? have her join him in general Konoha mayhem? something dastardly and evil?

The second is... the pairing? What's it going to be? As long as it won't be Hinata or Tenten, I'll be ecstatic.

Very intriguing beginning. Will be extremely interesting to see the story develop.

Thank you for writing.

Great story keep it up and update soon. I hope you update Session 2 of Everyone Has Darkness really soon its one of the best stories I have read. Please update soon on bothh stories.

I BOW TO YOUR AWESOME MY LORD! v-_-v BOW IS SAY!...*Offers a barrel Cola to appease thy thirst*

dude love the new story and cant wiat for season 2 but one question. do you plan to have him destroy the world or make his own village. pursonaly id like to see him make a village then get revenge. you know a kick in the nuts to mom and dad.

I want to be mad at you for this not being the sequel to Everyone has darkness, but this story is too good.

So far , i like it . Now you've made me all giddy and jumpy . I am slightly freaking out because there is continuation of your newly created fiction story . So please , don't be an asshole . Update ! People will be waiting .

Awesome and totally bad-ass! Love it!

Will Naruto not only kill Itachi will Naruto destroy the Leaf Village and kill Minato everyone that his parents friends.

Yay new story, First chapter was great, Cant wait for more. GO NARUTO!

LETS FUUUUUCCK IT!

great start. I believe this will be in the same class EHD, but in another way, since the humor is definitly not the same.

Great work, looking forward to the next update.

Interesting, will there be another chapter? How long will this be? I hope it's not just a one-shot, at least 2-3 chapters so we can see what happens would be nice. Of course it could also be a full-length story, with just a really long opener. Whatever, keep up the awesome work. I find that I enjoy betrayed naruto fics. I like your evil/dark naruto fics because unlike some you don't take the goody-goody naruto and suddenly turn him evil overnight, no, you have him always evil, or evil since childhood, this is much more believable. Some people like to go back and forth from good to bad, and I hate that, either stick with one or the other, or have him walk the line, don't be so wishy-washy about it. Or as so many authors have done, have him be betrayed/banished, have him swear vengence and become a badass, then have him come back, and then he changes his mind and decides to protect konoha instead of getting revenge. WTF? I mean a few times is good, but it seems he does it in almost every single fic.

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Awesome, this story definetely seems to be up to the standard of Everyone has Darkness. Less comedy, but still very good. I look forward to the next update.