Wow

That was...actually the best Naruto story I have ever read. I have been on fanfiction for years, and never have I came across such a fantastic product of sheer brilliance. It was not only awe-inspiring but thought provoking as well. I could never guess the main characters intentions-whether the man spoke truth or lie. The writer (though he had an abundant amount of A/N) had truly developed the characters to their true potential. As a writer myself, I am envious of your imagination. It’s hard trying to create an original in a world so full of people trying to be different-but you didn’t even try. This story was phenomenal. I loved the pairing (even though Jin’s actions made me want to cut off his dick but his actions really suited the personality you had for him). I am normally never a fan of incest, but they way you wrote them...It’s like you could understand them in a way only they themselves can. The only complaint I have (SPOILER ALERT) was Tsubaki’s reaction to have a ‘brother’, what her parents had done to said brother, how the brother was treated inside the villager. Even with her kind and caring personality I bet that she would have been pissed and would have never listened to Minato or even called him Father as a matter of fact. But, it was never explicit, she could have been manipulating Minato and everybody else for them to think she was okay with it...

Honestly, I am so very proud of this writer. I hope you continue to flourish as the years go by, and never stop just because some dumbasses think this was bad. I’m about to check out your other fanficts, thank you for publishing this work of art.

-Lulu

Great story just wanted to say I find it hilarious that, for once, Naruto/ Jin was actually the fox turned into a baby. Thanks for the awesome reading material!

Will you make this an Naru Tsubaki ship or should I say Jin Tsubaki ship

i think not even Minato was ranked that high, i am pretty sure he was ss ranked

Damn this story is full of twist, betrayal, and dark that i can't think to begin with

The best story. No cap.

Still holds up intensely well

The whole Pain is a real god thing Naruto did was way too funny...

Cliche crap number Three is most annoying.. here's an example "The Golden Fox" on wattpad, it has 30 or so fucking longass chapter in which Naruto just turns from hates konoha for first 15 story was quite good in the beginning, I was actually expecting him to turn really evil not just against konoha, but then he suddenly starts to care about konoha because his motherfucking, cock-sucking, daughter-of-a-slut OC girlfriend comes in and manages to persuade Naruto for an orgy with sasu/saku,OC/hina and many more konoha pairings...

Above average fic. Complete too. So thanks for two days of entertainment.

the thing is, Sasuke is a good base for a character, he can become an incredible character if he is treated right when writing, an he can also be an aweful character..

this is in regards to your AN where you talked about Naruto and Sasuke.

is gonna become a sister fucker?

*hands candytheres yer candy."

This is a really exciting and unorthodox fic - one which I've been very lucky to find. Genuinely think you've created a gem where the overall direction has been fantastic, albeit a bit wayward at times,and the plot is undoubtedly unique (not surprising... some of the twists are downright strange... in a good & weirdly logical way).

In the top 20/30 fics I've read - especially hard to achieve when developing and trying to contain such an overpowered character without diluting the storyline.

Kudos.