Reviews for Jasper and Bella
hannahlskercevic chapter 6 . 4/13
It a great story yay yay
Guest chapter 10 . 2/14
Where the rest
Goddess of War223344 chapter 10 . 2/12
You little-nevermind but you last posted in 2011! Please , write some more! it was 3 years ago hurry pleaz?
Guest chapter 7 . 1/15
This was small really good.I guess you have to post as many as possible
Katlynn chapter 9 . 11/16/2013
I liked it a lot , but can you do more chapters?
mickkila chapter 10 . 11/15/2013
Please continue this story it fantastic
Shawna chapter 8 . 10/28/2013
Another great chapter! I loved the end where Charlie's all 'What's wrong with your eyes...?' I could instantly hear the 'dun, dun, dun!' at the end. Keep up the good work!
Shawna chapter 7 . 10/28/2013
Once again, another wonderful chapter. Keep up the good work!
Shawna chapter 6 . 10/28/2013
Great chapter! I really liked how Peter only hunts bad humans like murderers and rapists and not good ones. Please continue!
shawna chapter 5 . 10/28/2013
Another wonderful chapter. I love this story! Please continue.
Shawna chapter 4 . 10/28/2013
Another great chapter. I loved every word. Please continue.
shawna chapter 3 . 10/28/2013
Another great chapter. Please continue.
Shawna chapter 2 . 10/28/2013
Great chapter. Please continue.
Shawna chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
Another wonderful chapter. Please continue.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/19/2013
OMG! thats sooooooo funny, two brothers fighting over 1 human girl
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