|Reviews for Forbidden Fruits|
| yaoifan124 chapter 30 . 9/14
I am so glad I found this story! This was so pleasing! Like omg! *swoons* Everything had me feeling all kinds of emotions! Laughing to the point I had to cover my mouth because it was three in the morning to almost choking from when Ace got hurt! This was beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing!
| TymiRocelin chapter 30 . 9/10
I regret not reading AU fanfictions until now, I almost missed this one!
I loved both the relationships between Ace and Marco and between Law ad Kidd. It was the first time I read something about Law and Kidd, and I must tell that I enjoyed it very much.
I liked that the first time Kidd and Law had sex, there were some problems, it made the story more realistic.
Kidd changed a lot during the story, I liked how he grew.
I was a little worried that you might have had Ace killed by Killer (I'm never sure Ace will live in fanfictions, as he died in the manga), but I'm glad everything turned okay at the end.
I love your writing, I hope you will write some more AceMarco and LawKidd stories!
| Fangirl101 chapter 30 . 7/8
Oh that ending was just beautiful! I've read many fanfictions about one piece in my time but this particular story is one of my top 10 favs!
Luv ya stories~
| Guest chapter 28 . 7/8
ACE AND PINEAPPIE MI POOR, INNOCENT, SWEET GAYBIES!
AND LAW U F-IN BRILLIANT GENIUS!
| Fangirl101 chapter 21 . 7/7
OH MAI POOR GAYBIES KID HOW COULD YOU HANDLE UR LUV SO ROUGHLY U BARBARIAN! B MORE CAREFUL U MASSIVE #! &$?
| Fangirl101 chapter 19 . 7/7
God plz jst let old man eustass die in a ditch I can't stand homophobic a-holes especially ones that don't approve of kidlaw! But still this chapter was pretty amazing if not better!
| Fangirl101 chapter 18 . 7/7
OH MAI GOWD THEY HAVE CAT BABIES NOW! IM SO UNBELIEVEBLY HAPPY I JUST CANT TAKE IT! IN MY MIND THEY LOOK SO SMOL!~
| Fangirl101 chapter 11 . 7/7
Ohhhh ACE! Mai poor baby!
| Fangirl101 chapter 3 . 7/7
OH MAI GOWD U HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH THE ENDING OF THIS CHAPTER MAKES ME HAPPY!
| Nike Scarlet chapter 30 . 7/3
...where have you been my whole life?! Seriously, I love the way you write these. I'm late, obivously, but that pales in this genius of a AU and pairings. I'm sorry, but this is awesome.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/21
Excellent writing! I really liked how you depicted Kidd/Law. Kidd's coming out was absolutely badass!
You took your time to build a logical and reasonable sequence of events, letting each character influence the other.
Did I mention that I love Law's grandma?
I wasn't a fan of MarcoAce 'cause I felt you let them off too easy. Ace's age was not really an obstacle if Macro had waited a few years.
Now Kidd/Law? Homophobic parents, psychotic friends and emotional walls... not to mention the possibility of Kidd killing him... Law still persevered despite that.
If there was any instance of unconditional love, that's it.
Thank you so much for letting me have the opportunity to read a quality work and absolutely love it!
| sanjiism chapter 30 . 4/1
you made a great job in making ace being a bit(?) immature and marco the reasonable one but still couldn't resist his love. and kid and law. omg kid and law probably the best couple here. I personally wanted to read this fic because of marace and think of kidlaw as a big bonus. but man kidlaw's relationship really is my fav in here. but marace is good too. plus I almost cry when I thought of marco never get to see ace anymore and vice versa omg no more pain like this. conclusion: I really love this and one of my fav
| Guest chapter 27 . 1/31
Yeah! Go go badass Grandma! You beat up Killer next time he comes along !
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/30
Nooooo! Ace! Marco! What were you thinking?! And, awwww Law was solo cute with Kidd. :-)
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/30
Omg! Doflamingo cameo! Holy mother frickin' cow!