|Reviews for A long Story|
| AnimeGamer42 chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
I just recently got into 21 Jump Street and I love it. You've done a great job with this story. I really like it. Although I'd like to make a friendly suggestion and that is to get a beta reader. There are some little grammatical and spelling errors that can be fixed. Other than that it's awesome. I really hope you continue writing. I would love to see what you have planned.
| ThatUncoolKid chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
I can't believe you haven't got any reviews! This is really good, well written and has loads of potential. I hope you make it into more than just a one shot, PLEASE do another chapter!