|Reviews for Flirting With the Enemy|
| 327rc9990 chapter 22 . 1/8
Love your story! It's a very creative original idea. Its nice to read a story where lily doesn't have a best friend who is rich, pretty and has a weird foreign name. This is my Favourite James/Lily story as of right now.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
On your character choices did you mean LILY EVANS ? Because you wrote LILY LUNA POTTER and that's James' grandchild.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
This sounds REALLY good already, I'm getting excited. (my sad life :c)
Only criticism I have is that you need to at least write 'Lily thought' or 'James thought' when writing down their thoughts. It gets pretty confusing... or put the thoughts in italics? (idk)
| Maddelynn Sky chapter 34 . 4/29/2013
I fucking love this! I wish JKRowling had something as cool as this in the books! Please please was write a sequel or epilogue! Thank you for writing this! This is by far one of the most creative Fanfictions I have ever read! :D
| Mythomagic101 chapter 34 . 3/30/2013
Its already been nearly 4 years
the epilogue please
| mordork1 chapter 34 . 12/10/2012
Yes i think you should wite an epiloge even a short one or ideally extend that last part and make a bit more love between James and lily pleeze ! :) l love this story but would have ratherd something more between them.. :)
| mordork1 chapter 21 . 12/10/2012
I cant believe people dont like the story anymore its great i'm marvelling at how cool an imagineation u have ! Ur making up Ur own stuff its so original (for fanfiction ) ;) i love the story and can almost imagine it as a movie ! But would like to see more James and lily and i dont see where the amazing love James has for lily is !? I think he needs to talk more about how much he loves her but thats just my opinion ... Great story ! :)
| Guest chapter 34 . 9/11/2012
Wow this story was amazing! It actually made me cry when she died! I wasnt sure if id like it at the start but i just carried on reading and im so glad i did! U r an amazing writer! Keep writin!
| finnickohdear chapter 19 . 6/21/2012
Okay, it's a good plot, but the story is droning on and on now. Also, the author's notes throughout the chapters are really bothering me. Put them all at the end because I just want to read the story without interruptions.
| Diane Potter chapter 34 . 5/11/2012
It already past 4 years. So Epilogue.
I was like "God! Lily isn't going to come to life again! Why the life is so unfair? Poor James *laughing, crying and being depressed*" This story is totally awesome I know I have repeat this word a lot of times but What can I say? That was just so fucking Amazing? Freking fantastic? It was like that every single detail even for you ex- Fourteen years old.
I have read this story in 3 days until now. I want to congratulate you even if you finished this story around 5 years ago. It was one of the best I have read in a time., now you're 25 or 26, no? And you started this like 11 years ago? This is having a great and powerful mind.
| the counter parts chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
this is awsome!
| Phoenix Moon17 chapter 34 . 12/25/2011
That-That-That was... *starts to cry* s-s-so s-sweet and sad! Good job with the story! Adios! :}
Peace,Love,and Treacle Tart!
| wild-daisy7 chapter 34 . 12/22/2011
Heya, I started reading this the other day and only just finished it, I really liked it, though I did get abit confused in places but I just kept going :)
You probably don't go on here anymore but it would be ace if you did do an epilogue
I'm definitely gonna take a look at some of your other stories, though it was because of a L/J christmas story I found you- which was also ace! And if I'm correct your birthday soon... Happy birthday for then if it is :) if its not I just seem strange now lol
:) so anyway great work, your 14 year old self should be proud lol
| insomniacClarinetist chapter 10 . 12/12/2011
Great story, but I gotta say this- Did you read Harry Potter? Becaus if you did, I think you would know it's the Imperius curse, not imperial. Just letting you know. Love this story!
| Audrey Lowe chapter 34 . 12/9/2011
This is quite possibly the most complicated story I've ever read. I mean there was so much going on! It must've taken you forever to come up with all of your insane ideas. I loved it!