Reviews for The Major meets the Mistress of Doom
TinaF chapter 1 . 6/14
Great story!
crotia chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
Nice story
Guest chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
love the cullens to come and see they are in charge and get some edward beating or something in there
4MeJasper chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
Yeah, she's bad! And now she's bad with Jasper!
Mika the Dark princess chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Lov it
kat callan chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
This was cool! A Sequel of the Cullen's comming to see the new rulers would be cool!:)(:
cloemarrie chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Wow I loved this story. It would be cool to find out how they do as leaders lol

Sisters Forever
Mylissa chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
wonderful story! i would love to know how there leadership works out. thanks for sharing your story
Danielleteambellaforever chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
I love all ur Japer Bella stories each one unique and interesting
sherry williams chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
omg

amazing

love it
TwiAggie94 chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
The Major & the Mistress. Great short story. Sadly no Edward roasting. Meg
Princess Mishawaka chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
Very, very good story. I loved it. I think that every time I read a story about Jasper I fall more in love with him.

I am very happy to read this story with Bella being a strong woman/vampire. Actually, the strongest. I always feel so bad about her being used and abused and when she is strong I feel like fist pumping YAY GO BELLA.

Very well written. You are a very good author.
Robin.D chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
that was a good story :):):D:D
twimama77 chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
Very very cool
Kim Ginsberg chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
Love it!