Reviews for I'd Lie
permanthiatus chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
I review in steps, so I hope you don't mind!

First: Admittedly, this is my first Dramione story. I'm pleasantly surprised. You didn't make them began instant friends and act like the previous six years of taunting hadn't happened. You didn't make them suddenly stop bickering and fall in love right away. I very much like that :]

Second: You did a good job on integrating the lyrics into the story. I could clearly tell that this story was based off "I'd Lie", even if the lyrics themselves weren't in the story. I didn't see any spelling/grammar mistakes, either.

Third: Very creative backstories, also. I don't recall ever reading a fanfic where Draco was color blind or had a sister. I especially liked it because it showed a sort-of softer side to Draco, also giving another reason why Hermione fell for him.

Overall: Great story. I enjoyed it very much :]

The results will be out soon following October 8th, as that's when the competition ends.
Lingo10 chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Emotional and you feel for them in the end.