Reviews for Everything In Moderation
Number One Fan of Journey chapter 9 . 5/9
Your writing flows well, and that was a great little humorous story to read! Thanks for posting it.
KaUiA chapter 9 . 5/12/2014
Hahahahaha. Love it! I can feel Maya's pain!
Darkblaze40 chapter 9 . 1/19/2014
"Better then mr nick"
AA Addict chapter 8 . 6/17/2013
I found this story quite amusing! Poor Maya, getting fat like that! Keep updating please, I want to find out how Maya escapes the Cavern of Tears and shows Mystic Mariah who's boss!
Victoria-White-Cat chapter 7 . 10/4/2012
PLOT TWIST! Lol I love this story
BananaMilkshake97 chapter 6 . 9/9/2012
Lol this is really good- Youve got the characters written perfectly. :)
Update soon please 8D
EnvisWood chapter 6 . 7/13/2012
Please finish this -)

By the way you stopped including Maya's thoughts in the story, I really think you should keep them in, they add so much to the humor!
Hannah-le-banana chapter 5 . 6/17/2012
Oooooooohhh I am loving this! I love Maya and Pearl! Just started reading this and I look forward to the next yaaaay!
Clydell Humphries chapter 3 . 2/14/2012
Oh, Pearly xD So adorable, Maya's going to be in for the shock of her life! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Ice Maiden Olivier chapter 3 . 2/12/2012
oh pearl is mean! poor, poor Maya :D
Ice Maiden Olivier chapter 2 . 11/21/2011
Aww poor maya, she is so sweet, and I just love pearly, excellent work this is :D
Ice Maiden Olivier chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
poor, poor Maya, when will she learn, this is excellent :D