I’m sure that your writing style has improved a lot since this story, but I just wanted to point out that so far there’s been an awful lot of repetition and unnecessary talk here. Sometimes you don’t need entire paragraphs to convey your meaning (show-don’t-tell). Your characters also have a habit of going on long monologues that just aren’t very believable in normal conversation. I find myself wanting to skip large chucks of text, as your characters (again and again) feel sorry for Snape and must (yet again) talk about how sorry they feel for Snape. Your word count could have been cut down and the quality of writing all the better for it. I hope it improves moving forward

What a chapter, truly amazing , so emotional and outstanding, I couldn't stop my tears... This chapter proves that why this story is called the best Snamione fic and loved so much by readers, Author's writing skills has achieved new heights with this chapter...Hats off to Author

Story is amazing, truly amazing, I'm loving it,but their is too too much slow burn, which is utterly frustrating, things are really moving very much slow between them, we understand Severus' hesitation,but really I don't understand Hermione's hesitation, Love is not mathematics or business where you calculate pros and cons, benefits and losses before taking a move. Ok,I understand in their case there should be some talking,some clarification before proceeding but seriously this is too slow

Wow, that was the best chapter till now, first reason because they kissed,I was waiting for that moment and I'm glad Severus initiated this because we all know how stubborn he is ,but still I don't like when Hermione said that we will wait,I mean now that's enough of slow burn now they should progress and take their mutual liking to next level,.. and second reason because here Severus finally decided that he is not following Dumbledore's plan,it means that later he doesn't have to face hatred of everyone especially Hermione and that twist was amazing

After reading so much praises about this fic finally I started this, For most of the Snamione shippers this is their most favourite fic , I also wanted to start this from a long time but the only thing that was stoping me was slow burn in this story, but eventually this story lures me

I don't know why but the last scene I can't help myself thinking about Spike in Buffy when he realized he was in love with her, he said "oh no". So that's my answer

First time reading this, living it BUT OH MY GOD DID YOU HAVE TO STOP THERE!

What did Ron do wrong? I don't like Ron that much, but he is entitled to kiss his GIRLFRIEND wherever he wants to. He is not in a relationship with Hermione, nor has he promised her to stay single. I'm sorry, but Hermione was way out of order here. I don't see why Ron should be apologizing.

Hi Loten! I am here because I love your stories and I read on tumblr that something wrong might happen soon to . I am worried that I will lost access to your beautiful fics.
Please would you consider migrating your stories to ao3?
Have a nice day good person!

This is the first fic that I've actually taken time to read properly. The bit about Harry being 'the Queen' has me laughing with tears.

Still one of the best work ever on this plateform, such a gréât story !

Hey,
Thanks for your work , it was a pleasur to read you. Have fun on your road!

This is the BEST Severus characterization that I have ever read! I couldn't tear myself away until I finished every delightful crumb of this fabulous story. Thank you so much for your work and for sharing it!

“I wouldn’t pay for this rubbish unless there is as a world shortage of toilet paper” I literally cackled out loud... visit the year 2020, Severus.

This is an amazing story, I have read it several times before and always feel a sense of excitement when I start it again. Your writing is incredible, this is one of the very best stories on Fanfiction.